In need of pieces to review!!

Okay guys.. I am having some difficulties for picking pieces to review.. I love to review all poetry and Romantic fiction.. Any takers?



I will also review any pieces and you want me to.. the reviews just wont be as good as they would be for poetry or romantic fiction.

Here's a poem of mine I would love to have more critique on:

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It's not romantic, but I have one other poem you could read that is kind of romantic.....sort of.....ish. Haha.

Thanks!


*anti-pop

Hey! This is sort of... romantic...not really, more teenage-angst, but I think romance will play a part. Be aware, it's part three, you are welcome to read the first two, but no crits are needed. Also, if you don't want to, this should make alright sense on its own. ^^
Title- The Zipper of Your Pants (3)

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romantic fiction: topic40060.html

review please???
tiff

Whoops.. Sorry forgot about this..I shall get on them right away!!!

review this please.

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