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Leon was bleeding everywhere but he was starting to heal. I saw Tim walk closer.
"He'll probably heal faster with blood." he said. I nodded and cut my wrist. I hadn't hunted in days so I deffinately have to after this.
My wrist touched Leon's lips and soon he latched on, gripping my wrist to his mouth and drinking in my blood. I grimaced in pain and Tim looked away. A vampie getting blood taken from them was the worst kind of pain.
I ripped away my hand before he could take anymore, cradeling it againt my chest.
Leon soon recvered.
"Where's Lizzy?"He asked, sitting up slowy.
Tim replied, able to look at us again. "They both ran that way."
We all started off in the direction Lizzy and Emmet had gone only to fin Lizzy's kin glowing in moonlight, her clothes shedded off of her.
I gasped and threw her a hoodie I was wearing over my lace camisole.
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Lizzy-

Wearing Luci's hoodie Lizzy tucked her body into it, creating an almost fedul position. "L-Luci, I-I'm sorry, I didn't mean to hurt Leon." Lizzy was sobbing.
Luci knelt besides her, and wrapped her arms around Lizzy. She realized how truly fragile Lizzy was, even though she was a wolf just moments ago. "Its ok, Leon is alright."
Luci allowed Lizzy to cry in her arms, for once in a long time feeling needed.
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***He'd have given her his shirt or something.***

Emmett:

Emmett stood there his arms crossed watching. "She needs to hunt in her wolf form or she'll attack someone again and could do worse."

shut up! Your not helping! Luci yeled at him.

"Yes, I am, she has to hunt or she could try and attack the whole school, how would we be able to protect her then?" He demanded.
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Tim


Everything was happening so fast, but Tim had to agree with Emmett, "She will ahve to hunt in her wolf form . . sooner or later and sooner rather than later, becasue later will be us."

He looked to LIzzie, "Lizzie? How do you feel about that?"

Leon snapped in front of Tim, "HOW DO YOU THINK SHE FEELS ABOUT THAT?"

Tim took a step back, stillwary of Leon's violent moods he replied with a shrug, "Calmer?"

Tim contacted Emmett, Hunting will do her some good, but I can't say it'll be safe for her, maybe some of us should accompany her or wtach her form afar so she doesn't get hurt.
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Emmett:

Emmett towered over Leon. "Leon, you listen to me and you listen good. You don't have a say in this!" HE hissed. "You should be in on this. If the head master or anyone else finds out what she is she'll be killed right away. Especially if a new born decides that they want to get a name and kill her!"

Think it will work? Tim asked.

Shut up and get out of my head! Emmett hissed at him.

"What do you say, Leon, you with me or not. I'll tie you up if I have to."
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Lucinda~

I watched as Emmet conviced Leon to join us or not. I could feel my veins burning.
I needed to hunt, badly, but I wnted to help out Lizzy first. My teeth grew as felt my body telling me that I needed blood. I'm sure my eye were glowing too.

"Luci are you okay?" I heard Lizzy' voice but couldn't answer. I hdto concetrate.

I saw Emmet look in my direction. I knew he would know at was going on. "Luci...? o hunt. You need to." His voice was calm.

"N-no. I'm fine. I need to help Lizzy." My voice was shakey as I spoke to the grond. I didn't want to hunt. Everytime my teeth sunk into flesh I tought of Kyle.
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Emmett:

Emmett growled, "GO! We'll wait until you get back if we have to."

"I don't want to." She replied. Emmett slipped next to her and forced her face up so she was looking at him.

"Luci, if you don't hunt you'll hurt Lizzy. Do you think Karl would wnat that to happen?" He asked in a voice low enough for just her to hear. He knows! She screamed to herself. "Yes, I can listen to people's thoughts and see their past. Go, we'll wait, I understand, if you want I'll come, we'll find a herd."
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Lizzy-

She didn't understand what they were talking about. All she knew was that she was cold and scared. The worst thing was a breeze going up her hoodie. Lizzy tugged it down and stood up, she tried her best not to shake. "Umm..." Lizzy tried to say something.
"C-Can I g-go back to my dorm?" Lizzy mumbled.
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Tim

Tim looked at Luci, "I'll go with you."

Tim hadn't hunted for a month, ever since he had been turned. He could feel himself growing weaker and he needed to make sure that he learnt off someone who knew how to hunt.

His brain was silently protesting to the fact of what he was about to do, "Luci, I'll come."

She looked at him and he saw her teeth grow, She must be starved,

He looked to Emmett and he backed down on his offer to hunt a herd, "I'm staying with Lizzie. Tim can go with you."

Tim looked at Luci this time and it was more of a qestion, "Can I come with you?"

He built himself up, ready for the rejection, he was used to it, no one was going to care either way. He waited for her reply with a held breath.
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Lizzy-

Emmett lead her back to her dorm. Leaving Tim, and Luci behind. Lizzy could hear Leon following far behind them; however he remained silent, and to Lizzy's amazment he was unharmed. Soon they all arrived at Lizzy's dorm. thank god! Now I can put on some clothes...and underware! I can't believe I just walked with two guys half naked!

Emmett smiled at her thought, but didn't say anything as Lizzy entered her dorm.
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Emmett:

Emmett waited outside her dorm until he knew she was dressed tehn he walked in.

"Know how to knock?" She demanded. "You didn't know if I was dressed!"

"Yes, I did.." He replied sitting down on a chair. He looked at Luci and Tim. "Go, be back fast." He said. Leon sat down across the room keeping his eyes moving.

"You'll get in trouble if your in here!" Lizzy said.

"No, we'll know if someone is coming." He replied. "Don't worry, now your tired, so get some rest your going to have a busy night."

What does he mean? She thought. Her heart rate went up too.

"If you don't want to kill any of us then get some sleep and we'll explain when Luci get's back." He said standing up and walking over to her. He grabbed her shoulders softly but firmly and led her to her bed forcing her to lay down. He then walked back over to the chair and sat there.
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Lizzy-

It seemed she didn't really have a choice in the matter, so even though she didn't like it. Lizzy slept with Leon and Emmett in the room, watching her sleep.
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Lucinda~

"Of course you can come with me. I prefer to have someone come along when I hunt anyway." I waved at Emmet, Leon, and Lizzy and drug Tim out the door.
"What do you prefer to hunt?" I asked. I hoped he didn't say human blood.

"I'm not really sure..." He sounded shy as i turned around to look at him.

"You mean you don't have a favorite or anything?" I asked.

"No, I mean I've never hunted before." His eyes drifted up to my face then back down to the ground.

I smiled. He seemed so nervous. I lifted his gaze up to meet mine. "Don't worry. We've all had a first time hunting." I gave him a warm smile and led him out towards the forest behind the school, designated for a quick hunt.
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(I GOT IT ^_^ Lizzy's special ability. Is to be imprinted upon, which means when someone uses their power and touches her she recieves them, but only for a short time ^_^)- how does that sound?


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I think that sounds good but mind waiting till Sunday? PLEASE?! I'm grounded and not even supposed to be on now.
It's your choice but I'd be really happy.

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