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I gave Emmett a dead glare, and he backed off.
I stormed after Lizz.
"Lizz..." I said to her.
"W-w-what is it?" She said to me, obviously a little scared.
Luci gave me a look that obviously said "Don't do it."
I didn't want lizz to think I was some freak obsessed with blood. Even though...I am.
"Lizz, im a vampire. and so i Luci....and Emmett... And everyone else here." I had finally said it. I looked around for asplit second an dnoticed Luci and Emmett felt releived to have it off tghere minds.
She started to shake.
I put my hand on her shoulder.
"Don't be afraid." I told her.




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Emmett:

Emmett gritted his teeth standing next to Leon. "What are you trying to do?" he hissed. "If you get me in trouble i'll tear you limb from limb." He hissed. "You really need to control yourself. Don't let everyone know that she knows." He hissed.
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(I feel as if every time I try to involve my character in the story, he just disappears, *cries* Oh and just for a fact only the person Tim is mind-talking to can hear him, apart from Emmett, of course.)

Tim


Tim reached his mind over to Emmett, Can you read Leon's mind to see if his intentions are honest?

Emmet nodded, Tim thought, I'll contact Lizzie and try to calm her down.

Tim reached his mind out to her, Lizzie?

She looked over at him, he could tell she was having a hard time with all of this confessions, then secrets being revealed, Tim began, Think of a running stream, now imagine yourself sitting in front of it on lush green soft grass. You can hear the chirping of birds and the slight breeze blows gently on your skin.Only warmness surrounds you, but not that of the sun, the warmness one can always feel radiating from within.

He could feel her tension slowly fading away as he described it in more detail. She looked a little less frightened and a little bit more calm.

He moved on to Leon, but hesitated momentarily, he contacted Emmett, You think he's sane? He didn't use to act like this . . . did he?
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I glared at Leon again. He only smirked and looked back to Lizzy. Tim was near and he was trying to calm Lizzy down but it wouldn't work for long. I mean if you were a human in a school full of vampires you'd be freaked too.
"Lizzy, darling?" i said quietly, putting my hand on her shoulder. She flinched a little but looked at me.
I saw her running from the school. Well trying to, Williams stopped her.
It was a short vision but it was enough. I softened my expression.
"Lizzy. I promise, it isn't what you think. We're civilized." I told her. I swear sounded like a mother but I wanted to calm her down and have her accept us.
"All of us except for Leon apparently." Emmet scoffed. I couldn't help but grin a little as I glanced at Leon but when I turned back to Lizzy I smiled.
"I'm still the same Luci." I was trying my best to comfort her.
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(I might not be on for awhile...maybe)

Lizzy-

a...vampire?

Lizzy broke out into laughter. Everyone stared at her. "Yeah, yeah. If that's true then I'm frikin God."
She walked away, trying to pretend to be uneffected. Luci quickly followed her.




Unfortunatly Lizzy knew one this about herself. That she was always right, no matter what.





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Lizzy-

"L-Lizzy are you alright?" Luci asked.
Her voice was trembling, she new something bad was going to happen. Lizzy stopped they were outside, in the nighttime atmosphere. The moon was full that night. Lizzy turned around to face Luci. "No."
It was a quick answer before the sound of a howl filled the air.

It was the sound of a wolf.
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Lucinda~

I crouched down in a defensive stance. Lizzy was transforming into a werewolf? Is that why she'd been at our school.
I did know if she meant me any harm or not so I stayed back, away from her.
I hoped someone would com soon so I could do something.
On one hand I wanted tell her I wanted to go hang out like we'd been doing and on the other I was afraid. I'd gotten to know her as a human and now I find out she's a werewolf. We're supposed to despise them. Although, when have I ever followed the rules.
I slowly started towards Lizzy, holding back to see if she was okay with me coming so close.
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(Ok, I can work with this. I'll just flat out say that Lizzy has three forms- human, wolf, and (THis one is a surprise)

Lizzy-

Nothing made sense. Lizzy just felt so angry at everything. Once again she howled, making Luci bare her fangs. The one thing Lizzy really hated was the hunger. She needed to eat, badly.
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(You gotta sound out what Lizzy is saying)

Lizzy-

Luci backed away, trying to say something, but to Lizzy all it looked like was just a bunch of nonsense. Lizzy walked towards her, her mouth pouring drool. "Sshou huhunngy. Looooshi!" Lizzy growled.


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Tim



He cocked his head, A HOWL?

A werewolf howl?

He was sure Emmett and Leon had heard it too. They looked at each other; the message unspoken, but nonetheless it felt.

Something weird was happening, Tim contacted Leon and Emmett, I think it's a werewolf.

Emmett nodded and then as if something had hit him, It's coming in roughly the same direction Lizzi and Luci went!

Tim's eyes widened, he wa sright he looked to Leon, but was surprised to find him already running in the direction of the howl.

Tim and Emmett followed close behind. The first thing they saw was Luci slowly walking to wards something.

Then they saw the something. A werewolf. Tim had been correct.

It grolwed seemingly gibberish, "Sshou huhunngy. Looooshi!"

They all ran up tp Luci concerned.
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Emmmett:

Emmett ran towards teh noise and bared his teeth crouching low.

"IT'S LIZZY!" Luci warned. He froze and looked at her. He looked back at Lizzy. She was confussed, he could see it in her head. He slowly walked towards her.

"Lizzy, don't move, ok, I'm not going to hurt you."
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Tim stared at Lucinda aghast, "THAT'S Lizzie?"

Lucinda nodded. Tim swallowed, his throat suddenly dry. He reached his mind out to LIzzie, Lizzie?

Her eyes flickered over to him and he continued, Lizzie, now tell me what do you want?

Tim had to ask her directly, his claming meditation would not work in a tense stressful atmosphere like this.

He felt her reply.
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Lizzy-

She was so hungry. Then with out thinking, Lizzy pounced towards Tim. Trying to attack him, by digging her fangs into his soft cold flesh; however Emmett tackled Lizzy pushing her away. Lizzy slashed her claws at him, tearing his chest. He shedded crimson tears across the cement. Emmett fell to his knees.
"Don't do it!" Tim shouted.
Lizzy walked closer to Emmett, but then Luci blocked her path. "Lizzy I won't let you do it!" She cried.
Just as Lizzy was about the pounce onto Luci, Leon appeared out of nowhere and lept in front of Luci. Creating a sheild from his flesh and bone. His blood splattered all over Lizzy. Everyone stared, as Luci screamed. Lizzy stepped away. She looked around, rapidly.
"W-Whiee? lweon!" She roared.
Lizzy ran away from the scene, runnning like a ravidge dog.
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Emmett:

Emmett waited until he healed. He then jumped up. "Take care of him!" HE hissed taking off after Lizzie. "Stupid dog." He hissed under his teeth, she's never changed before.

WHAT DID I DO! She kept screaming at herself. He finally found her and slammed her to the ground so she wouldn't run. He crouched a few steps from her and crossed his arms.

"Attack me, and I will hurt you." He said sternly. "None of us wanted to hurt you, but if you try again I will. Now, listen and listen good. Your a werewolf, if you haven't noticed, we're vampires and you better get it through your head that you could kill one of almost as easily as we could kill you. You'll have to learn to be careful. Now, if you'll follow me I"ll lead you somewhere where you can get something to eat and you won't attack anyone else. Shake your head yes if you agree, if you dont' you'll have to leave!"
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Lizzy-

Lizzy didn't understand what Emmett was saying. He had forced her to the ground and was yelling nonsense at her. Slowly before Emmett's eyes Lizzy began to change back, her eyes still a bright yellow. Lizzy began to sob, she was so scared. Emmett sighed. "Its ok."
He released his grip on her, but then blushed. When Lizzy had turned all of her cloths had been ripped off.



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