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Night Wing Academy

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1. Life for 17 years old, Lizzy McClure is average in every single way; however one day she is accepted into a mysterious private school in Transylvania. Thinking of the best possible future for herself. Lizzy goes to this ‘private school’, but when she goes she begins to suspect a few things.
1. The school isn’t, as it really seems.
2. She is in real danger, since a body guard has to always be near her
3. Everyone in the school are vampires.
How will Lizzy McClure survive when everyone else is a bloodthirsty monster? Or maybe she is just over reacting. Find out in “Night Wing Academy”.

Rules:
1. There is only one normal human- Lizzy. Everyone else can either be a vampire or something else- but you have to ask first!
2. No godmodding (There may be vampires but they are not invincible)
3. No killing other characters with out permission. (No exceptions)
4. No sex scenes (Passionately kissing at most)
5. Limited cursing (Please do not over do it)
6. Do not suddenly change the plot to fit you best (Think of others- if you continue no more storyboard for you)
7. Relax (There’s no rush, do not rapidly skip over things if you get bored)
8. Please do not do any claiming for romance- let it be a surprise.
9. Please do not make too many characters (Keep it under control- no more than 5)
10. Night Wing Academy has school uniforms (there will be a picture of both men and women versions)

Character Profile:

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Personality: (Be descriptive)
Appearance: (If you do not have a picture be very detailed)
History: (Be detailed- somewhat)
Species: (Only one normal human for now- either a vampire, or something else (With my permission)
Status in School: (which grade, if you work there, or something else similar to this)
Other: (Anything else you wanna add)
Up for love: (Do not claim if you are up for love)


Ok Here is my person’s profile.

Name: Elizabeth (Lizzy) McClure

Age: 16

Gender: female

Personality: She is a somewhat cautious girl. She is dedicated to having a good future as an adult. She hates it when people blame their problems on others and do nothing to fix them. Lizzy is easily determined and is somewhat of a goody tooshoo. Some people would call her somewhat naïve, and child like. She’s book smart but not very street smart. Lizzy gets easily lost. She loves to read on calm warm sunny days, and eating ice cream. She dislikes enclosed spaces and blood.

Appearance: She isn’t ugly, but not beautiful- just normal. At least compared with all the other students. http://liahona.deviantart.com/art/Summer-Bliss-71042406

History: Lizzy grew up a normal human life. She went to school, and finished JR high. Now she has been accepted into this high-class school. Was it a mistake or on purpose?
All Lizzy knows is that the school is something else, than just a school.

Species: Human.

Status in School: Student- Freshmen.

Other: Her blood type is Tc(a-). Right now there are no known donors, and it is not available in National Frozen Blood Bank, and Frozen Blood Council/Europe. It’s very rare.

Up for love: Yes





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Name: Emmett Rose

Age: Appears 18, he is really 118

Gender: Male

Personality: He is really sweet, he is like a gentle giant, but he is ready to hurt anyone if they hurt any of his friends or anyone else that is close to him. He is a rule breaker at times.

Appearance: He is very muscular sense he was a REALLY big guy when he was human. He is about 6'5, and very strong.

History: He was bit by a lonely female vampire when he was 18, right after she bit him she was killed and he was left on his own to fivure out what was going on with him.

Species: Vampire

Status in School: Senior

Other: (Anything else you wanna add)

Up for love: Yes
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Name: James Wilkinson

Age: Appears 17, really 72

Gender: Male

Personality: James is a laid back king of person. He looks at things from a distance and only gets involved if he thinks it's "interesting." He can be rather energetic if something peaks his interest, otherwise he's rather calm and down. He usually has a smile on his face rarely gets too serious unless it involves danger.

Appearance: http://wintersleeper.deviantart.com/art ... t-61329670

History: James' family were all vampires, but they were crazed and blood thirsty. They were killed by the government and James was adopted by a human. His adopted father taught him the good in the human world and now he drink synthetic blood instead of real blood.

Species: vampire

Status in School: Sophomore (10th)

Other: Nope

Up for love: (So I put nothing here right?)
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Name: Lucinda (Luci) Dobra

Age: 16

Gender: Female

Personality: She beautiful and she knows it but she's sweet. She doesn't like most of the attention she gets. Though she does like to flirt sometimes. Just for fun, you know. Lucinda has many friends just because she likes to talk and make others happy no matter what. If a friend seems like she's having a crappy day Lucinda is one of those people that would do something incredibly dumb to cheer them up.

Appearance: http://media.photobucket.com/image/blon ... 2.jpg?o=45
Like her but she has the most vibrant green eyes in the world. Like green grass in a prairie.

History: Lucinda's family is one of the elite vampire families. She was always expected to be proper and didn't enjoy it much. She'd had private tutors until one time she disgraced the family by falling for a human (which was one of the worst things you could do in her family) and they sent her to the school so she could become "disciplined" and a "true vampire" (she's always laughed at that idea
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Species: Vampire

Status in School: Sophomore (10th)

Other: She has a kitty that sometimes stows away in her bag. She's gotten in trouble for him quite a few times. She called him Vladimir just for laughs. her parents still hate the cat.

Up for love: Yes
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Name:Phoebe but everyone calls her Lee

age:17 (she's been around since the school started)

gender: Female

Species:Vampire

Personality: She is a protecter towards everyone, more like a leader, she lets her feelings of what's right and wrong sometimes get in the way. She is so lovable it's hard to hate her, she does get into arguements but only for the greater good.

appearance:

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History: Phoebe was one of the professors daughters, she was adoptied and then one day she found her father, one of the proffessors, dead. Phoebe has protected everyone she's known and cared about since.

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Name: Zephyr Lazarus

Nickname= Phyr (Pronounced Fear)

Age: Appears to be 18 but is actually 20.

Gender: Male

Personality: Zephyr is young and reckless. He has trouble controlling his thirst for human blood and has no morals against drinking it. He is also wild and always seems to be hosting parties and inviting humans and vampires alike. To other vampires, he is charming and popular but they also think him ignorant and out of control.

Appearance: Zephyr has silvery blond hair that reaches to his chin and his eyes are a stunning, forget-me-not blue with flecks of silver and lilac (Like this.). His body is slightly muscular and his skin is still a healthy peach colour.

History: Zephyr was bitten just two years ago by a female vampire who longed to have a son of her own. Zephyr was at first confused and full of anger but that soon turned to excitement and love for the mother who had released him from his human bonds. Zephyr followed her to a different town where she lived in a magnificent house and enrolled in the human school there. At first, he coped. He would go to school by day and invite a female class-mate back to his house at night. His mother always kept an eye on him, making sure he didn't take too much blood and then she would wipe the human's memory and send her home. But then, after almost a year, Zephyr wanted more and he began to kill his victims, losing any control he had. His mother decided to enroll him at the vampire school in the hopes that it would mature him. But the last year has done very little to affect his personality.

Species: Vampire.

Status in School: He's in his second year now.

Up for love: Yes.
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Name: Maria Striker

Age: 17

Gender: Female

Personality: Very naive at times when it comes to how good humans are she is quite serious when it comes to the vampires around her. She gets anoyed at times when a freind, Zephyr gets into truble ofr killing a human or two but other times seh'll join him gladly. Her personality is spilt to say the least.

Appearance: http://yumedust.deviantart.com/art/Vex-Harrow-87732407

History: She just been a vampire since she can remeber but never found complete control. She thought about the private school for so long when she finally went it was too late but she stayed anyways.

Species: vampire

Status in School: Sophomore

Other: Everyone calls her hungrey half Grace for her spead and agilaity that are equaly inhanced with grace.

Up for love: yes
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Name: Tim (Has no known last name)

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Personality: Perhaps he was different once, but now he is a conniving person, who feels no loyalty to anyone not woth his time, though if a bond of friendship with him is made, expect him to give his life for a friend. Is cold as steel and never shows emotions unless he can't control them. Feels lonely most of the time. He is often known for day-dreaming and staring into nothing.

Appearance: Raven-black hair, blood red eyes, lean, tall and has very little muscle. Still has two bite marks evident on his neck, scars that will not, much to his chargrin, go away.

History: Only one month beforehand was Tim sired into a vampire. His blood was almost completely drained and he unforetunately lost all memories of the event or any event that had taken place before his siring. His sirer is unknown, his past is unknown and the personality he built up because of his experiences is unknown. Little is known of him, except a card was taped onto his body, with the name, "Tim". He took the name as his own and discovered acouple of days later that he was an orphan and he was in fact 16. The school, accepted him under the circumstance that he would not disturb the older students, which are nearly all of them.

Species: Vampire

Status in School: Student

Other: His current hobbies are playing with peoples emotions; seeing he can't make firends, because of his abnormality in which he is actually the age he is meant to be and that fact that his siring-bites are still there. This isn't even including the circumstances that the school put him in to enter it. He, though thin, is extremly fast.

Up for love: Sure, why not? And he, because of memory lost, dosen't even which gender he prefers. (lol, that doesn't mean he is gay, but he unsure of everything now, lost in his confusion.)
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Ok Here's what I got so far.

1 human- Lizzy(female


7 vampires- four males three females. I will wait one more day before we begin. To let everyone know the head princible is a human priest by the name of Father Bentic. Everything else anyone can make up, like the teachers, othe princibles, other school workers and students. ^_^
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Name: Sevren Tesmore

Age: 17

Gender: Male

Personality: Terribly reckless and just out there, Sevren loves to pull tricks and has a whole book of pranks and riddles to mess with other students and teacher (that he made over the years). He loves to be in the lime light and tries his best to be the most outragous vampire in the school. Sevren is rarely ever sad and has a life-long goal to create a prank so big that it'd turn the school upside down.

Appearance: http://kotorikurama.deviantart.com/art/ ... y-85879772

His hair is a light white-blond that fades in and out of a sort of grayish near the front. Sevren's eyes are a lapis lazuli blue and has two scratches on the left, while a patch is covering the right. He also wears a huge dog collar, a lip ring, and two earing on his left ear.

History: Sevren Tesmore was an orphan most all of his life, being cramped into small rooms with others. It was total nightmare for him--until one of the upper middle class family took him in after they had the idea that he was just being "creative" after they saw him pull a trick that set the orphanage on fire. It was then at his new home that something when wrong while helping cook and his right eye got damaged, which forced him to wear the patch.

Species: Vampire

Status in School: Student

Other: Is usually followed around by a raven named Nevermore

Up for love: Yes
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
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Name: Michiko Miyazawa

Age: 18 (859)

Gender: Female

Personality: Michiko is a very mysterious being. She's one of those people who captivate others with their beauty, coldness and grace. Although Michiko is a very cold being she likes people. Observing different beings is her hobby. She can often be found staring at someone for extended amounts of time, as if they'd reveal all their secrets to her. Michiko rarely smiles (even though she's amused by many things) but when she does it's small and stunning.

Appearance:
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History: Michiko was born a normal child in Japan in the year 1149. She lived as a human for eighteen years, until the Vampire Wars of Japan started in 1167. This was a short lived war that produced hundreds of new vampires that were supposed to be used for fighting. Michiko and her parents were turned and sent over to Transylvania to fight the other coven. Luckily they didn't have to fight due to a treaty that had been signed. Michiko and her parents were left along with the rest of the soldiers. They later made a village for the outcast vampire solders and their families. Over the years their village had grown into a city with the academy owned by Michiko's parents. Now vampires come from all over the world to stay in the sanctuary that's run by the soldiers.

Species: Vampire

Status in School: Teacher and student. Since Michiko is older and more experienced than most of the vampires she helps teach when she's needed and sits in classes to try and learn more all the other times.

Up for love: Yes

Other: This song gives you a feel of what Michiko is like.




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Name: Leon Scott

Age:17

Gender: Male

Personality:A very quiet person. He's quick about moving from class to class and likes to keep his thoughts on his work rather than the temptation of drinking Lizzy's warm blood.

Appearance: Image

History: His father was a vampire and his mother was a human. His mother died after his birth due to his fierce strength in the womb.

Species: Vampire

Status in School: Senior

Other: Many people follow him around and he gets the feeling people adore him a little too much.


Up for love: Yes

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Lizzy McClure-

It was a normal day, just like all the many others that seemed to pile up in her life. Lizzy McClure got up everyday, got dressed, went to work (A paper route), got ready for school, went to school, came back home, went to work (store clerk), came back home and then went to bed. She had repeated that everyday for the past 2 years; however, there was something special about this day. Lizzy McClure had been accepted into a very 'special' private school, so special it wasn't even in her own country (USA). The only thing that puzzled her was that she hadn't even applied to that school in the first place! Instinctly Lizzy thought of the best thing for her future, and it involved going to this 'school'; which meant moving to another country.
After a long day of flying and dealing with the 'horrors' that come with it. Lizzy McClure arrived at the school.

Exiting the bus, Lizzy stretched her arms outward, trying to crack her back. After a satisfying snap, she moaned. "I am so tired."
When she tried to walk foreword a man dressed in a black suit blocked her. Lizzy looked up at him. "Tall." She thought.
He looked down at her. "I am Williams, and I am here to escort you to the head principle."
Before she could nod, 'Williams' snatched her back, and quickly walked away. Lizzy tried her best to keep up with him. "What a warm welcome." She whispered.
Following Mr. Williams, Lizzy got a lot of strange looks from the other students, and when I mean a lot I mean A LOT! Lizzy felt like she was some kind of strange alien creature visiting earth. However she did get nine even stranger looks from both female and male students. (That all the other characters ^_^). Out of all the looks she had gotten that day, those 9 were the most significant.

After of what seemed like forever to Lizzy, they (Lizzy, Mr.Williams) finally arrived at the head principle's office. Mr. Williams pushed Lizzy in, but stayed outside. She was somewhat not surprised.
Lizzy walked to the desk at the end of the room, in front of a stained glass window. She stopped in front of it.
"Ms. McClure, good. I have been expecting you." A calming male voice said.
Lizzy gave a slight nod. "Hello"
Lizzy couldn't see the man, for he was sitting in a desk chair (the spinning ones) and was turning away. "I am Father Bentic." He turned the chair around.
Lizzy almost gasped. She had expected an old wrinkly man, but instead got a young, tan, blond haired hottie! This she did not expect. Father Bentic smiled. "Yes i always get that look, when people first meet me." He had almost boasted that out, with a small grin.
Clearly he knew how handsome he really was. Lizzy just remained silent, only giving a slight nod. The head principle stood up. He was holding a bunch of papers. "OK, I have here your papers. From schedules, to your room key." He handed the 'papers' to Lizzy.
"Thanks." She quietly said.
"Alright, the only thing I need to tell you is that Mr. Williams will be accompanying you where ever you go." Father Bentic explained.
Lizzy wasn't really paying attention. "Why?"
"no real reason." He said with a smile.
Father Bentic jumped out of his chair besides Lizzy, he was beginning to push her out the door. "Alright now get out there and LEARN..." Lizzy was now almost out of the door. "Oh, and don't get eaten."
Lizzy turned back to him, she was now outside of the room. "What!"
Before she could get an answer he slammed the door in her face. Lizzy thought for a moment. "What did he say?"
Lizzy looked over to her new 'bodyguard', Mr. Williams. What had she gotten herself into?




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Tim

Tim sat and stared at a wall blankly. He was told he must leave all his seniors alone. Not that he cared anyway. Tim's right eye twicthed, Somehitng wasn't right.

He could sense a presence in the school that was new.

And apparently human. His eyes widened momentarily, Human?

Had someone brought food upon campus?

Wary, Tim carefully searched out the scent of human. He was eventually led to a brown haired-normal looking girl; who was in fact human. She was followed closely behind by another vampire. (Mr Williams is a vampire, right?)

Interesting, what was a human doing in this shcool? What am I doing in this school?

He clenched his teeth, and replied to his own thoughts, Nothing, nothing at all.

He walked up, she seemed about his age so, he wasn't going against the policy that the shcool had set up to let him in. SHe looked at him blankly and the guard, alert stepped forward slightly.

Tim began, "You are human?"

She raised an eyebrow, suddenly cautious, "Why wouldn't I be?"

Tim looked at her coldly, "No reason, just thought that you might be cold-blooded like some of the souless and cold-hearted people here. It's good to know you're different. Nice to meet you, I'm Tim."

He was lying through his teeth, he wasn't pleased to meet her, he wasn't even sure why he had lied, but there must've been reaosn as to why the Head Principal had not told her that she was in a school FULL of vampires. He wasn't pleased to even be in this school but he had to get some answers, that only this school provided.

She looked at him a second and replied, strectching out a hand, "Lizzie, Lizzie McClure."

Tim stared at her hand for a seocnd and then as if realising that he was meant to shake it, put out his hand. He resisted the urge to bite it, the urge which sickened his to no end. He was still in soul; human. He was also still concsious of the bite scars on his neck that would not fade away.

They shook hands, watched carefully by the guard, Tim looked to him a cold-steely look in his eyes, "And you would be?"
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Zephyr

I was waiting outside the principal's office when I first caught a glance of her. She had this mousy brown hair that really wasn't my thing and these stunning green eyes that totally were. And I could smell her blood: sweet and sickly with an almost cinnamon scent. She was human.

Unable to resist the urge, I leaned forwards, my eyes lingering on her soft, peachy neck. A human... in school. It seemed so long since I walked freely amongst them through the hallways and this one... this one had protection. I leaned back against the wall and nodded at the vampire who followed in her wake. His eyes clung to me for a moment and then they resumed their surveillance of the other pupils.

She wasn't in there long. Just long enough for me to get control of my senses and to remind myself that I could walk around without launching myself at her. But oh, what a fun game it would have been had she been available. Still. There were prettier humans than her who attended my parties. Not that looks was everything of course. That was merely the old human side of me thinking. What my new vampire self liked best was the blood. Sometimes young blood was best, fresh and sweet and lovely. But on certain days I favoured old blood. Not really old blood you have to understand but blood that had matured and grown rich and strong.

And yet. As she passed me again and I reached the door of the principle's office, that cinnamon smell clogged my nostrils and I couldn't help but flash her a charming smile. It was a reflex move. But I think it placed me in that body-guard's bad books right from the start.

"You're probably wondering why I asked you to come," Father Bentic said. I made no response.

"You must have seen her by now. Well I know your past and I know about your... parties. She's off limits, Zephyr. She's under my protection. Understood?"

"Yes sir," I said.
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