I need a critique-er

I need one for my storys Less Then Perfect and A Bloodied Rose. both are vampire storys, A Bloodied Rose is a tad like twilight and Less Then perfect, takes a new view on a vampire named Nathan. I would love for people to read then and critique! PLEASE!

Hey Tabithalillian. =)

The Will Review For Food forum is actually for advertising yourself to review other people's stories/poems, not to request reviews from others.

If you want to request a review, you should check out one of the advertisement threads posted by others.

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