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High school never ends

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Whyis everyone dropping out? :(
I thought the plot was good... It was just getting started.
Some say laughing is the best medicine but what do you do when you can't laugh anymore?

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its not my falt that the popular haven't been online and and that im trying to get everyone together
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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I'm still in. Bring in my character and I'll start posting ok.
I will always fight back, no matter what.




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As Anthony past the cafeteria he decided to grab something to drink before heading to gym for a little track practice. He decided to go in the back door, but he nearly ran into a girl. Behind her he heard the principal.

"Help me." She said as she pushed him into the door way. Anthony stood face to face with the principle.

"What are you doing here?"

"I'm just grabbing a drink before going to the Gym. I have a free period then gym, so I was going to get so track practice in." The principal looked at his pass and nodded leaving.

"Thank you for that. The names Dusty, third year."

"Anthony, second. Come on, the coach wont mind if I bring a guest, I'll get you out of here." He smiled and motioned for her to follow.
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Dusty:

Dusty smiled. "Thanks, I owe you." She said following him. "How'd you mangage to get mister pain to listen to you. No matter what he is normally a pain." He laughed at that. She smiled waiting for his answer. He was pretty cool.

"I'm really good at track." He grinned. She laughed, go figure he would be easy on any sport stars.

"What do you run?" She asked. SHe had used to run until she had gotten really bad at it. It wasn't surprising due to her clumsiness at times.
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**Is it too late to join?**

Name: Jason Weaver

Age: 16

Apperance: Slightly wavy brown hair, brown eyes, tall and skinny.

School Year: Junior (Year 11)

Group: Populars, but gets along with everyone fine.

History: He grew up in Australia but his family moved to England when his dad changed jobs. He likes sports, but more at a social level than a competitive one. His family's wealthy, but he doesn't like to brag about it or show off. In fact, he's a little embarrassed by it.

Family: (please say whos in family and ages)
Mum: Alison Weaver (45)
Dad: David Weaver (47)
Sister: Josephine (Josie) Weaver (14)

Other: Up for love.
He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt. - Yossarian, Catch-22

Wide-eyed stupid.

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no never to late
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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-sorry if I am posting too late....I think the story is going great and I wouldn't quit it..Sorry if you thought that I didn't care.-

Sasha:
As Anthony and Dusty laughed and talked, Sasha was watching the two with envy. She didn't want to show it but her angry, blue eyes made it very obvious.
"look at those two lovebirds". She said in a disgusted tone. "It just makes me sick!"
"oohh! Somebody's jealous" Raian sing songed.
Sasha flashed her angry, blue eyes at her but slightly blushed.
"I am soo not jealous!" Sasha shot at her best friend. "I mean, look at him. You seriously think I would want to go out with that guy?"
"Come on, Sash. You can't hide it from me...why don't you ask him for a movie this saturday?"
"Yeah, and he'll come because he is soo in love with me" Sasha said sarcastically. "Come on, lets go."
Before turning and walking away from the cafeteria, Sasha took a final glance at the two. They looked so happy and it just made Sasha so sad!

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Maria:

She was late. Very late. She ran as fast as she could jumping over things and running past one of the track people. He had a girl with him. SHe dismissed it quite esaly and ran straight into the principle. She gave a gasp and got up quickly. She ran. And ran she did. She was fast but wasn't much for track or cross contry if there was that at this school. SHe was Ameriacn too but still having grown up in this place she didn't have a problem adjusting. She just had a broken alram clock.

"Hey! Rebeeca!" She slid right across the table in the band room and sat in her seat as a bell wrong. The teacher gave her a look she thought was the funniest since she was almost late every day. It was no biggy. "What's up teach?" The teacher gave up to scowling at her. "Okay. Okay. I got it. Wait- What do I have to do now?" She hated the things she had to do sometimes.

"Go run. You need to get your energy out of you. Take this to the track coach and make it snapy." SHe was handed a red sticky note with the words 4 miles on it. She gave a frown and then glanced up at the teacher showing the fackest smile she could give.

"Got it." SHe took off running again and hear a loud noise as the teacher yelled after her.

"Oi! Coach!" She yelled as she ran to a stop infront of him. She handed him the stick note.

"Okay. 16 laps. Let's get a move on!" SHe started running as the track boy and the girl came out to the track.

"Darned the alarm clock," She mumbled to herself. SHe wuod be winded after sixteen laps and she would probable fall asleep in all her classes too. After this she'd find a spot out under one fot he trees and go to sleep. She tend to dot hat anyways.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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*woah... O.O four pages? I'm just going to jump into lunch if that's okay*

[Sevren Gresmond]

His hand passed against his forehead and brushed the dark hair out of his eyes. Sevren glanced around quickly before turning his attention back to the floor. Cafeteria, he thought, rounding the corner.

Suddenly, a pair of feet appeared in front of his, and, before he got the chance to move around, Sevren found himself on the floor. A girl with an annoyed expression sat to his left, struggling to get up. Her friend's mouth opened in a little O shape, quickly helped her up.

Sevren brushed himself off and took a step back. "Sorry," he murmured quietly, making sure that no one was in his way when he started again. The two girls didn't seem to reply, or maybe they didn't hear him.

Sevren glanced backwards at the one he tripped and couldn't help but stop again. His hands bunched up and baried themselves into his pants pockets. "I'm, um, sorry... Are you okay?" he said a little louder, wondering the whole time what had forced him to stop.
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
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*hey :) sorry i haven't posted :( (my sister is a computer hog) anywho...i think i will join in here :) i might be a little slow becuase of school, but i will et a post in when i can :)*

RaiAn looked up at the boy who had run her over. Sasha helped her up and they both stared at him. Then RaiAn remebered that he had asked a question.
"Yeah I'm fine." she said, sounding a little distant. What was it about this boy that made her so dizzy? Sasha snapped her back to reality when she pulled her away towards the cafeteria.
omg lol thx HD!




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[Sevren Gresmond]

That was odd, noted a voice inside his head. Sevren watched her leave and then turned around and headed for one of the lines. It was quick, unlike most days, maybe it was because his mind was elsewhere.

He grabbed a random tray assorted with fries and a burger, rushing to a table before the room got overcrowed with students. The girl and her friend passed by and Sevren glanced up from his food, watching her pass--she seemed to be doing the same.

A groups of rockers entered the cafeteria just then, loud and laughing, along with a group of populars behind them. The rockers made their way towards where Sevren was sitting and formed themselves around him. They must have been juniors and not known him, making the usual mistake of thinking he was one of them. One of them addressed him as a punk. It made him laugh.

Sevren casually talked along with them, laughing at times and pointing out some of the recent things he'd heard about. The two girls passed by again--with food in their hands this time--and was about to pass by when Sevren stood up and stopped them.

"Hey, wanna sit with us?" he asked, brushing his dark hair out of his face.
Our happiness here is all vain glory,
This false world is but transitory,
The flesh is weak, the Fiend is slee
Timor mortis conturbat me.
--William Dunbar




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"Really?" RaiAn said with excitment in her voice. She has always wanted to sit with the rockers, but she had never been invited to do so. She looked at Sasha then back at the boy. "OK" then she sat down next to him with a big smile on her face. Sasha sat next to RaiAn and looked a little uncomfortable. "What's your name?" RaiAn asked the boy she had sat next to.
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*Im going to make another charater cuz none of my characters friends are posting!!*

Name:Amy Daniels

Age:14

Apperance:
eyes
http://chrisp001.deviantart.com/art/Blonde-49622916

Shoulder length blench blonde hair, Mascara and skin coloured eye shadow, and lip gloss

School Year: year 9

Group: Populars

History:Brought up with her single mum who is now going out with a 25 year old.

Family:
Mum, carole: 39
Step dad:Dave 25
Brother:Jacob 17

Other:up for love, normal chav girl.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!




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Name:Leon Mattias

Age:17

Apperance: http://www.quizilla.com/user_images/F/F ... 843_02.jpg

School Year: 3

Group: The Rockers

History: Doesn't Discuss his history.

Family: Family died at age 13, he is now an Orphan

Other: *Up for love :P*



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