Critique Booth Is Now Open

Hey all interested people who want critiques!

What you can expect when you ask for a critique:

I'll do line-edits (grammar, sentence structure).
I'll check out the characters.
And I'll see if the macro parts of your story work.
I'll also answer the following three questions about each of your stories:

1) What is the story about?
2) What is Idiosyncratic about the piece?
3) What does the main character want and fear?

If I can't answer the questions, I'll expound on why you may have a problem with your story.

General Guidelines:

I review: Fantasy, Sci-Fi, Other Fiction, Action-Adventure, Historical Fiction
I don't really review: Romance or Thrillers/Horror Stories. Also, I don't really critique poetry.

Just post the link of what you want me to review in a message below and I will get to it ASAP! For longer pieces it will take me a longer time to review so don't get nervous if I don't have it back to you by the night of your request.

Stuff I have Reviewed:

Scavenger
Suicide Kills Us All
The Scient Witch
Accidents Happen
Lord Anzius's Work
Blind
Liana Unbroken
My Dearest Madelyn
Carved Bone Part I
Carved Bone Part II
Running With Wolves

Can't wait to see the requests

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Thanks in advance!

Done! Anyone else?

Suicide Kills Us All

Please? It's kind of long, so you don't have to (haha, you don't have to no matter what,) but I would really appreciate it.

~JFW1415

Done!
Who's my next victim?

Ooo me please! *waves frantically*

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There is a prologue that received much love ... so I'm not expecting a crit for that

Here it is any way: topic30694.html

Thanks!

Done!

I want more!

EDITED: I LOVE REVIEWING! PLEASE ASK FOR SOME REVIEWS!

Here's one. I tried something new there.

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Its short.

Done!

Next?

This is short... But then again it is a prologue..


Historical fiction:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post470509.html#470509

It is called Ashurbanipal

Done! Next?

Could you review "Blind"? It's in Science Fiction.

Done! Next?

That was quick! Thank you; I edited it just now.