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Vampires in the Midnight Blue

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Description of storyline: scientists who know about the creatures of the night have come to discover a new type of scientific uses: fusing the vampire race with that of an animal...making hybrids. (ie: vampire/eagle hybrid you can use this if you would like) contact me with any questions about the storyline...i will make sure to message you back with an answer.

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Name: Zane Aurion
Gender: male
Eye Color: Grey
Animal Hybrid With: Panther
What You Wear: Black robes with all black underneath
Description of Character: first vampire to be fused with animal...used to work nights at the lab until they found out that he was a vampire. he was the prototype for this experiment. many things went wrong with the operation...has powers that no one else that was experimented on has...like being able to turn fully into a panther...also hears voices in his head telling him to do things to humans which he sometimes cannot control. knows all about the scientists and the operation to make the hybrids.

AN:will have first part in sometime later...if you would like to make characters then put their information up and i will get back to you
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Name: JF4
Gender: Male
Eye color: Grey
Animal Hybrid: Lizard
What He wears: A Tshirt and jeans.
Description: After finding out about Hybrid usage, a Goverment agency decided to use them to train the elite soldiers of the century. JF4 had memory loss and can't even remember his name.
He however will never intentally kill a innocent human and seems to like to draw Comics.
He looks like a 17 year old and is unsure of giving up to the voices in his head.
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Name: Jase
Gender: female
Eye Color: Green -Hair: Brown
Animal Hybrid With: Leopard
What You Wear: White clothes that look as though they were used for a karate class or something.
Description of Character: Some girl they found on the street to test on. They said they would pay her for her corporation. They lied. She ended up being a vampire by birth and is very withdrawn. She doesn't like very much to be around anyone because she's not sure she can trust them.

*Hello vamplord :) *
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*I freakin' love vampires.*
Name: Leon Kennedy
Gender: male
age: 15 (real age 63)
Eye Color: Black
Animal Hybrid With: Cougar
What You Wear: A black trench-coat with a black short sleeved shirt underneath and Long black pants.
Description of Character:A usually laid back vampire, yet, when he is fighting he isn't fun to be around. He was fused with a cougar at age 15 for a scientific breakthrough. He tends to stay calm untill it gets physical. *up for love*




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Name: Kratos Aurion
Gender: Male
Eye color: Crimson
Hair color: Black (Also color of mane)
Age: 14
Animal Hybrid with: Komodo Dragon
Description: Younger brother of Zane, who is in a way, ignorant of everything around him. He's also kind of childish when it comes to being a creature of the night. In many ways, he looks up to Zane because he's the oldest and wisest hybrid of all, but secretly wants to surpass him as a hybrid. Kratos is an invaluable asset in war and has an uplifting personality that no one can't smile to.
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PROLOGUE 2 years before actual story

Five scientists were huddled around an operating table. On the table was a boy who looked around 13. This boy, was a vampire. And this vampire, was named Zane. Zane used to work nights at the lab in which this takes place. Zane might have looked like a 13 year old with jet black hair, but he was the smartest "scientists" they had ever had.

These scientists had recently discovered that there were such things as creatures of the night. After this discovery, they developed a way to fuse different animals with other beings. After a few human trials, they figured out that there was something wrong.

All of the humans had died in surgery. These exact scientists did a series of tests on vampire's and human "volunteer's" blood. One certain scientist named Mobias Brizingr found out why the humans had all died in mid-operation, while vampires did not. Vampires had more red blood cells from their excessive drinking of it and because of that, the fusing was much more successful.

As the scientists were huddled around the table, just finishing up on putting the panther DNA inside him, something extremely dangerous happened. The vampire, Zane woke up. Since the DNA that Zane was being infused with was a panther, it was horrific what had happened.

Zane, using his amazingly powerful vampiric strength, broke the straps holding him down and attacked. He killed 2 of the doctors, lucky for them though, neither was Mobias.

Zane ran from the lab, shifting into panther form unconsciously. His speed increased ten-fold as he sped out of the laboratory. The walls and the people were blurs as he raced past. He could hear two things as he ran.

The first thing he heard was: "Someone! Call an ambulance! We have two dead men in here! We need help!"

The second thing he heard was an aftereffect of the surgery, he heard a voice in the back of his mind: You need to kill the humans, kill them all!!!

No, no, no!! Get out of my head!! he thought.

Zane ran until he came upon an abandoned warehouse, climbed though a broken window and waited, hoping his sibling would find him soon.

~6 months later~

Zane had been "missing" for a long time now, his brother Kratos has been worried and distressed about his brothers disappearance. Wait a second... he thought Zane and I had a place to go if we ever got into any trouble, maybe he is there.

Kratos walked to the abandoned warehouse, crawled through a broken window and stepped blindly into the darkness. He heard a shuffling sound behind him. Before he could turn around, something hit him in the back and he went sprawling across the floor. The creature leaped onto him, pinning him to the ground. The beast went in for the kill.
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Kratos was in a state of shock. In the few seconds that these strange events occurred, hundreds of thoughts began running throughout his head as fast as his teenage adrenaline could force him to.

What was that noise?

What hit me?

Is there something else in here besides me?

Is it going to kill me?

WHAT'S GOING ON!?

So many questions and yet all that Kratos would get that he could see is a hand, no, more like a spear as far as anyone could tell, thrust into his neck. The claws on the hand were so long and pointed, with the weird color of blood mixed with the darkness of night, it seemed as if it was worse than a spear.

Well Kratos, as the ignorant fool he is, thought ge could've stood a chance at least giving a fight to this phantom he still could not yet see thanks to the shadows. He turned his body, forcing the creature to slide off of him, giving him a slight second to get out the door to broad daylight where he could easily see this monster.

Kratos estimated wrong though, the reaction time of the creature was much quicker than any normal man and it's agility is nothing to sneeze at either. It smashed into Kratos with a force that made his arm snap as if it was a twig.

But by some turn of luck, the force of the tackle shot Kratos and the creature outside where it was broad daylight and anything could be seen.

Kratos gasped.

This was no ordinary creature, it was a vampire-panther-humaniod-thing. Kratos didn't care what it was though, all he cared about is the fact that that thing is undeniably his own brother.

They stared eachother down for several minutes which seemed like long lasting hours, no days. Maybe even possibly years. Until the vampanther, as that's what Kratos decided to call it, made a movement towards him.

Kratos was still deeply scared, but couldn't move. The one chance he met his brother in six months and he wasn't just about to screw up the moment any more than it was.

Soon, they both started to move towards eachother, the glisening of the sun off Zane's hair and eyes, it made him almost seem human.

Reality soon dawned on Kratos, he was severely wounded due to the tackle moments before. With no hospitals for miles of his home town, it seemed unlikely that he was going to get out alive.

Kratos soon started to feel very lightheaded and was passing out. There wasn't much time until he passed on.

His seemingly last word was "Zane".

Something remarkable happened just before he collapsed though. Zane caught him.

With some mixed swearing and some words of sympathy, Zane took off somewhere.

It wasn't easy to tell what was going on at that point, he was nearly unconscious and his vision was blurry.

What Kratos last heard was "You're going to be alright, I know some people that can help you."
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^ months after Zane's operation-

Jase:
They yanked her away, into a dark vehicle. At first she fought back but soon calmed. They had needles and she didn't particularly like those things.

"We have a favor to ask." One said.

"We will surely pay you too." Another one said. Jase sat back. What was this and why would they pay her? They soon arrived at a big building. They helped her along the walkway as she was very unsteady. She hadn't ridden in a car in forever. She hated it too. "This way." One said. She never kept track of witch one said what. They all looked the same.

They led her to a room. It held needles and scalpels and other equipment she could not name. They had her put on a funny mask and she obeyed. The gas that came to her airways soon had her engulfed and she was dreaming. Wait. She wasn't dreaming. She was having a memory. It was very fuzzy. Something of her father. His image was quite blurry and she couldn't make out full images. She kept looking and looking, trying to get a better picture of what he looked like and she couldn't.

Back in the operating room her pulse was rising. They tried to subdue it but it made her pulse rise quicker. Something was going wrong. Once again. They thought they had gotten the kinks worked out. They were wrong. One machine exploded. It was easy to replace and nothing major. Each and everyone backed away from the table were the girl's body lay, half open and working it's way into the leopard jeans that lay just inside her body. They watched as the body started to heal itself. Then they figured for sure she was a vampire.

She lay there still in a trance and her mind wouldn't come out of it. The mask was ripped off her face and she was pulled onto some one's shoulder and she was taken out of that dreadful place. Her body lay limp over the boy's shoulder.
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A.N. SIC, you can bring yourself in, but you might want to be in another country or state and you can meet up with us later.

also...after much thought and consideration, i have decided to make this storybook and actual story. with your help i can make it amazing. i am doing this because i think that it would look much better in story form. though i will be making many changes to the stuff you guys are adding to it. you will see what i mean when i post the story.
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The two soldier felt the heat hit their faces as they sat in their chairs in the Booth. They were suppose to be guarding the base from anyone that doesn't have a permit.
" Damn...why can't they built their base at someplace cooler....like Minisota?"
The other soldier looked at him with a groan." But they don't want those UFO freaks to have the spaceship so they can blow up the world or whatever."
" Yeah....What kind of idiot would believe that their's something in Area 51?"

" Subject JF4..."
A scream was heard. Warner looked around nervously. The Sientist looked at him with a grin.
" Are you really in the army?"
Warner gulped." Yeah, but mostly...in Weapons manufactur."
" Well Mr. Warner, We have the ultimate weapon...something that I think your goverment will enjoy greatly. We have a soldier."
The sientist then opened up a panel in the control room.
" A soldier so deadly and fast that just 10 of these could fight the entire US Army."
Warner then saw what was beyond the Panel. in a glass encased chamber was a gaint humanoid lizard. It was wearing a loose fitting Tshirt and cargo pants. It must have been 6 feet tall.
" Is this a...?"
" No. This is a vampire Warner. Not a alien."
The Vampire looked at the both of them in the control room and waved at them. The sientist waved back.
" I thought Vampires were fake..."
" Not anymore. We found him in New york."
" So...Vampires look like this?"
" No. We genitcly inserted Lizard genes in him and this is just when he is prepared for battle."
A alarm rang. Suddenly a door opened in the chamber and revealed a robot with a SMG attached to a arm. It suddenly began to fire.
The vampire quickly ran up the robot and snapped off it's Gun. He then tore off it's circuit board and then threw it at the Chamber walls.
warner laughed.
" This is good...How much?"
" We can talk it out. But for now...let's get him to Transport."
The Chamber walls opened and two figures with guns Walked up to the lizard.
" Now I think we can arrange for a price of..."
A scream came from the Chamber. Suddenly the Window for the Control room was shattered as a Man was flung through it.
" Use the kill switch!" The Sientist yelled. But the Lizard was suddenly out of the chamber...and into the control room.


" So your going to Mickeys tommorow?" The soldier said as the heat began to remind him of beer.
" Hell yeah. It's too damn hot out here!"
A alarm rang. Both of the soldiers looked up and then in two second saw a lizard creature run past the gates and into the desert.
Both of the men looked at each other.
" Was that...?"
" No Man...Just no."
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~ZANE~

I get out of the building with not much time to spare. As I run from the building I call up Kratos.

"Hey bro, I need a room for a leopard by the time I get there, I'll be there in about 20 minutes if I push myself to the limit of my speed," I say.

"Dude, how far away are you? If it takes you 20 minutes to get here at top speed you must be far away." Kratos sounded busy.

"I'm a few states over, scouting out another area. I have this facility marked on a map so I can keep an eye on it with another one of our members."

"Okay but get back soon, I have another sighting of another creature. A soldier over in another state gave us the basics, the creature is part lizard. I have yet to get the information on the state but I will have it soon," Kratos said uninformative-like.

"Well before you do that, help Syvilious get the room ready," I said, annoyed, "I'm going to stop for a couple minutes, that damned voice is talking to me again." I shut off my phone, stopped in front of a bench, and sat, placing the unconscious body of the girl beside me.

Hey, since you know everything I guess, I have a question for you.

Yes? And this question would be???

Does she have a voice too? Like me and Kratos?

No, she does not, the only reason you and Kratos have the voice is because you woke up nearing the end of the surgery. One of the machines exploded in her operation, they actually knew how much sleeping gas to use.

That's good, I wouldn't want her having a voice that annoys the hell out of her like I have. Mine is such a pain in the ass.

Yeah I know what you are talking abou- wait a second. You little prick! If I wasn't here you would know so little of what you know now.

That's true, I was messing with you for a little bit there, I need some relief from you sometimes.

Okay, well we better get going before she wakes up, if she wakes up now, bad things could happen.

You're right, we had better get going.


I picked up the body of the girl and started running again. The trees and buildings were a blur and I sped past. I got to the warehouse with a little time to spare before she woke up. I walked up to Kratos.

"Hey, what room will she be in?" I asked anxiously.

"She will be in room 5." Kratos said calmly, looking at the body of the girl with a look in his eyes.

I walk away as calmly as I could and say while talking: "If you really think she would fall for a guy like you then you are kidding yourself. Don't even try it because I do not think that a komodo dragon would go very well with a leopard."

Kratos went and sulked at the desk in the middle of the holding room for all the old boxes that were there before they replaced it all with the equipment they took from the Omegacorp testing lab before burning it down to the ground.

“So you think she would go better with you?” he asked angrily.

“Well yes, as we are both members of the feline family I think that we would go great together. But I am not interested in dating at this point in time, we do not yet know yet if this girl is hostile or not. I will get her to her room and run some tests to see if she is alright. Also I have some business to attend to when I get done with greeting her.”

I take the girl in question up the stairs and to the room marked 5. As I pass room 4, I notice that the door is open. I look in and see Syvilious sitting on his bed. I wave at him, he returns the greeting and I continue walking.

When I get to the girls room, I open the door, place her on the bed and strap her down. I leave the room for a minute and come back with a set of machines. These machines will help to see whether she will be hostile when she wakes up or not. I begin the tests and in a few minutes I have determined that she will not be of any harm when she awakens.

I scrawl a quick note on a piece of paper, put it on her side table where she will be able to see it when she wakes up, take the straps off of her, and, pulling the machines behind me, I make my leave.

This is what the note says: Leopard girl, my name is Zane, I rescued you from the facility you were being tested on and brought you here. This organization is called The Coven Of The Hybrids. We are a society of vampire/animal hybrids who must work together to survive. We rescue others of our kind and help them discover their hidden abilities and talents. If you would like to know more, visit me in room 1, my office, and when you get there i would like to know one thing in-particular, your name. You might meet others on the way here, do not talk to them, and do not answer them when they talk to you. I will tell you about them when you get here.
Sincerely,
~Zane
By the way, if you would like to know, I am part panther.
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Name: Leona
Gender: Female
Eye color: A vibrant green
Hair color: Black
Animal Hybrid: Jaguar
What she wears: Lace up boots, fishnets, a black mini skirt, and a grey halter top.
Description: Her twin brother is Leon and they were turned at the same time. They usually stick together but there are times when Leona can't stand her twin and leaves. She hates herself for killing sometimes but she can't grasp control.


Leona~

I was sitting in the living room filing my nails when Leon came in. He was so tired he walked through like a zombie. I laughed lightly.
"You okay?" I asked and he grunted a response. I rolled my eyes and continued to fix up my nails. Leon sat down with something in a cup and turned the TV on. He flipped through the channels aimlessly.
"Pick something? That's kind of annoying." He didn't listen. He was being annoying on purpose I decided. I threw my nail file at him and he laughed at my attempt to hurt him. I rolled my eyes and walked towards the door.
"Where are you going?" He asked, turning the channel yet again.
"Out," I replied.
I walked along the darkend sidewalk, clinging to my jacket. So many hours and nothing to do. I thought to myself as I passed a bar. Twomen came out and followed me down the sidewalk. I could hear their shoes as they walked along behing me. I started to walk faster but they picked up their pace too. I groaned inwardly. Two drunks wanting to hang out with an underage girl... Great. I turned around to face them and sneered.
"Quit following me, okay? I'm not interested." I turned back around and then the guy grabbed my wrist. "Hey, leggo!" I said. He pulled me towards some BMW and trew me in.
"Take us to the lab." The shorter of the two said.
"Lab, what? Let me out!" I yelled. The two exchanged a glance and nodded. I felt a prick on the arm and then everything went black.

I woke up on a table with straps and needles. I screamed as I felt a burning in my veins. My heard something that sounded like a growl and realized it was me. I srtuggled against the straps but it was no use. My eyes went blurry and I just stayed still letting them finish. There was nothing I could do, I was helpless.
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