Apocalipse

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Jones ran to the fishing store and quickly pulled out a boat.
People were running around like their heads were chopped off. Many were looting stores and one person was even lifting a wallet from a dead person.
Jones then saw his apartment. It was pretty safe and normal, But the electricity was going to go out soon...He had to make a call.

He called in two of his friends who were the only ones willing to help people instead of getting their family or themselves out.
" Private, you got the Humvee and Infalatable?" Jones said to Frank. He nodded his head and pointed outside to the knee deep water." I don't think we need the humvee."
" We need it for ourselves. Barnaby, I need you for communications. You will come with me and direct as many people as possible to the boat."
Barnaby saluted and Jones gave the thumbs up and then brought out his pistol. Both of them looked at Jones.
" There is panic out there...too many people will do ANYTHING to get themselves out...even kill others."
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Gena watched as the man was pulled aboared along with another boy.

She looked at both questioningly.Now she was getting great ideas for a story but would she make it through to the end and tell of an acheaving person.
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Darman tapped the fuel Gage in disbelief it had been sitting on empty for ten minutes and they were finally landing. "I am gonna be fired. I am gonna be fired."

The Sargent Walked to the chopper and directed two maintenance men to refuel the chopper. "I told you to evac."

"Sir, I know sir." Darman replied "I understand if you court martial me sir, but I have a job to do."

"I know that son. We took an oath to defend this country and every man woman and child in it. You did well." The CO said. "What do you think you are doing now?" He requested


"Going back!" with that the chopper lifted back into the sky with a half tank of fuel and minus two occupant, the young boy and the teenager.
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-If the world is going to end soon, so be it. It can end without me. Myself
-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?p=364993#364993 When the World Stops Spinning




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"Thanks."Gena said as the helicopter headed back to the beach...
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

“This precious book of love, this unbound lover,
To beautify him only lacks a cover.”
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Darman:

Hovering over L.A. Darman could see the chaos. He saw an overturned boat with bodies floating around it, floating in pools of thier own blood. "So is this how civilization was supposed to end?" talking more to himeslf than the other occupants.

The copilot turned Darmans attention to a girl standing on a balcony of the collage dormatories. "Take me there." He strained to make his voice audiable. Darman shoved the basket out of the open door and slide down the fast rope and into the basket. He keyed his mike, "get me to the balcony, now!" The chopper eased into postion as the water continued to rise. About 10 feet from the balcony the chopper could go no closer with out the blade contacting the building and killing them all. Darman stared at the girl as she realized he was trying to save her.

Darman yelled over the noise. "Follow me and trust me."

She nodded in responce. Darman dove into the frezzing water that covered the first story of every building in L.A.
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-If the world is going to end soon, so be it. It can end without me. Myself
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Jamie:

"Thank you." I whispered in his ear, my eyes sad. I didn't know what else to do. I wanted to cry. All those dead people! The horror of it would be forever in my memory. I sighed and allowed the man to lift me. He looked about my same age. "Thanks." I said again.




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So I'm lost but that's okiedokie.

Clair had ran to high ground when the girl told her friend's house had been destroyed. She just ran and ran, threw her books down and ran.
She ended up on a street unknown to her. People around her was frantic. Babies crying, helicopters flying over head, sirens of police cars and some ambulances. Clair was in a daze.

Someone wake me up. She told her self.

But no one did. She leaned against an abandoned car and slowly sunk down looking around, the wind whipping her hair in her face. Clair didn't really feel it or see it. She just sunk to the ground and without realizing, the ground beneath her began to rumble and shake.



So I'm super lost and I'm not sure if I want to continue to post in this story because of the speed it is going and so forth. I really wished it would have slowed down and stuff but that's my opinion. So I don't want to slow you guys down from having fun and writing. If you would, please kill off my character if you wish or someone else can be her. I don't really mind=] Adious.




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Maki chan bring me in please :D




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Louis:

the call came over the intercom later that day.

"Alert all personel. we are evacuating the compound, we will be removed to a secure location. takeoff in 1 hour. Be ready."

Louis was already packed, he had known this was coming since the news had first broken. he had known that it was just a matter of time until the world started to reject our abuse. now it has come. they were going to one og the 3 secure locations in the country. these locations, were built to last even the most destructive of human weapons, it was said that they could withstand a direct nuclear blast. but what is a nuclear blast compared to the awesome power at mother earth's disposal? what indeed.

and how could they cower and hide while the wolrd stood in chaos? how indeed.

and what of the rest of the world? yes, we have access to teh bes satellites in the wolrd. so we are somewhat better aware of the global situation that the average joe. great lightning storms had spread across the deserts and savannas of africa, meanwhile, australia was frozen, with ice storms, europe was expiriencing much the same conditions as the USA. but other than these sketchy details, we had nothing. nothing indeed.



*there we go*
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ok...im lost..ill just start where i left off......

Jennifer:

Hurridely, she threw a sundress on that she had lain out to wear to day for a picnic. As sh ewas slipping her sandals on, she noticed the corruption that was beginning in the hallway.

How am i gonna get out? she thought.

ring...ring...

She answered before it started again.

"Hello?" She asked.

"Jennifer?" A womans voice asked.

"Mama? Oh my god! Where are you? Are you ok?" She questioned.

"We're still in California, but trying to make our way back to Colorado. Jen, did you hear about the tidal wave? We just heard it on the news. They say have of San Diego is underwater by now, and San Fransico is completely covered. Oh God Jen, what are we gonna do?" Her mother pleaded.

"Mama, where exactly are you?" She asked grabbing her car keys. I gotta get to headquarters fast. She thought rushing out the door.

"We're about 10 miles from Nevada. We should be back by......Tuesday." Her mom answered.

"Where's dad? Have you talked to him? Is he ok?" She asked. Her dad and mom had been divorced for about a decade now, but still remained friends somehow.

"I don't know, I haven't talked to him since Friday. Look sweetie I've got to go. I love you and I'll talk to you soon."

"Ok, Mom. Becareful. Love you too. Bye." She said getting into her car. No way she was gonna be late. Doug is gonna kill me if I don't hurry.. She thought as she drove out of the parking lot unaware of the danger that she would be facing in the next few weeks.


*well thats all i got for now, ill be at headquarters most of the time unless im needed for services (nurse)*
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He grbbed the basket and pulled her aboard. "Now hold on this could be a rough ride." He said. He slung his M4 rifle onto his back and prayed it would fire the next time he needed it to. His mic was ruined along with the reciver ear piece for his comlink.

Darman pulled himself into the basket and signaling for the pilots to raise them up. Darman heard the stain of the wench. it was never designed to lift two fully grown adults up. The wench whined and barely made progress in its long pull. The noise of the wench continued to grow and all Darman could think was it was going to give and let them fall. He placed his hands over her ears to keep he as calm as possible. Just a few more feet Darman thought, jsut a few more feet.

The wenche's electric motor began to smoke as the basket rounded the door frame and it locked up. The motor smoldering from the force as the helicopter moved of to find someone else in need of rescue
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Jamie:

I knew the basket thing would hold two of us. But there was a solution. I wiggled out of his arms and started climbing the rope. I loved mountain climbing. It was sort of a hobby. I reached the helicopter, and the basket pulled the soldier up. I smiled. "There's a solution for everything." I said as he stared in disbelief.




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"Hi Jamie..."she said trailing off ash she saw her freind emerge fronm the ....*got 2 go...*
We've all been broken in some way. It's just how we express it that makes us dffrent form eachother.

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Jones looked on as people were marching through the cold water and some even looked up at the people on the inflatable raft.
It was equipped with a machine gun and a Fan and was speciifly designed for disaster zones.
Jones sighed as they reached deeper waters.
" Oh sweet god..."
Jones then saw it. They were passing the kindergarten....nobody survived...
One of his men threw up.
" Keep moving." Jones whispered and then Jones looked up to see a man standing on top of a skyscraper....it was about 70 feet up.
" Stay up there man!" Jones yelled and then ordered his men to get right next to the building. He broke through a window and then rushed through each floor and was on the ceiling in five minutes.

Jones watched the man stand up there with a glazed look on his eyes.
" Sir, Rescue is on there way."
The man still looked at the city...particually the kindergrarten.
" Oh god..." Jones whispered and then walked up to the man.
The man took a step foward. Jones rushed foward and grabbed the man's shirt. He pulled him back. The man tried to punch him but Jones knocked him out.

Jones putted the man onto the boat and then continued foward. They saw a helicopter up in the sky. He waved for it.
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Darman:

The pilot tried to get Darman's attention but he couldn't hear them without his com-link. The pilot took the helicopter down lower and Darman figured out what was happening. They were going to save someone else. The chopper dropped altitude and hovered over the water. They were just high enough to not wobble into the rushing river that had been a busy street only hours before.

The people on the boat seemed to know what they were doing. Maybe not like an Army Ranger, but enough to save themselves. The boat approached the hovering helicopter and one by one the occupants climbed aboard. When they all four were on, the chopper lifted away. Darman looked over the co-pilots shoulder and saw the last thing he ever wanted to see... again. The fuel Gage was just over empty and with forty miles to go, they weren't going to make it. Darman pointed over in the direction of the safe zone to tell the pilots to head home.

Darman went to everyone of the occupants and told them he was sorry for their losses. What he really meant was I saved you for a minute only to crash you the next. He had a certain sympathy for the collage girl. He thought he should at least get her name before they crashed. "Hi ma'am, My name is Private First Class, Darman Lister, US Army Rangers."

"Hi soldier." she replied, "My name is Jamie."

Darman paused for a lack of things to say. "Uh... Are you hurt." He finally replied.

"No, I am fine. justa little shaken up, that's all." she said with a tint of humor in her voice

"Well, that's good... I mean is there anything I can... uh... do for you." He stuttered.

Jamie began to laugh. "Are all our men in the army this girl shy?"

"Yes ma'am... I mean No ma'am.... Would you settle for an I don't know?"

The other occupants of the helicopter began to laugh as the soldier attempted to talk to this girl. Darman hung his and moved away.
-"When God gives you lemons, you find new God" YouTube.com
-If the world is going to end soon, so be it. It can end without me. Myself
-http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?p=364993#364993 When the World Stops Spinning



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