The Dorm

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*****major is what you are planning on doing. Minor is kinda a fall back thing. ******


Dawn---

"It is," She smiled, "Everyone needs a doctor sooner or later, and it pays if you are good at what you do and stay stright in your work." She smiled. She looked his face over and smiled. "So, where are you from?"
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Lilith~

Lilith smiled and handed Lily her paper. "Sure, I haven't checked over it yet so don't blame me when your eyes burn," she laughed lightly.
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Adam-

"Boston," [if I ever live in America, which I probably won't, that's where I'd go], he replied. "And you're from Texas, right?"

She nodded. "You got a big family?"

"Two sisters," I replied. "One's sixteen, one's fourteen. And an older brother. How about you?"
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Dawn----


Dawn smiled, "I'm one of seven kids." She grinned, "I'm the youngest. The rest are brothers."


***Sorry it is short. I need to eat***
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Adam- *haha, change your name to Ginny why don't you!"

"Wow," he whistled. "That's a lot. So I guess you're pretty tough then?" I teased her.

She shrugged. "Maybe," she grinned.
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***Ginny????***

Dawn--

"So, Doctor man," She grinned, "Tell me. Why did you pick this school?"



***Who is Ginny, and sorry it is short again.***
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*Ginny like from Harry Potter I'm guessing..*

so im stuck..somebody help me
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*Yeah, Ginny Weasley in HP has six older brothers too...*

"Don't know," I shrugged. "I guess I just wanted to get away. I just spent a year travelling, I guess I just didn't want to go back home and go back to my normal life. How about you?"

*sorry, all I got**
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**Never read it.**

Dawn---

"I wanted to get my degree. Nothing amazing or anything." She replied, "Where did you travel to?"


***didn't have much either.***
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*Okay, fair enough! Oh flip, I forgot he had a brother, whom I've already mentioned! Dammit! I'll change that last post!*

Adam-

"Europe, I have family in Britain and Ireland. Went to France and Germany. Then I went down to South Africa, my brother's working down there."

"Really, as what?"

"Helping build housing, education. Mostly charity stuff, he's not making a lot of money, but he's happy and he's helping."

"That's good," she said grinning.

"Yeah. Once I finish here, if I get the funds, I plan on going down there and working in the local surgery."

"Sounds like a lot of fun."

"Yeah, I guess so," I said. "So what about you?"
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Dawn---

"I just planned on trying and getting a few stories written and published. Then probably go somewhere different and keep writing, possibly teach people to write and about english. WHo knows." She smiled. "My dad wants me to stay at the ranch and train horses for him, but I don't know, I just want to do something different. All my brothers run ranches in the area. I mean in the end I'll probably end up there. But I want to do something to help others, course if I can just a book published to help."
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**So, I'm very very grounded...and can't seem to keep Tristan in here...*sigh***
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