Symbiotic Relationships

...in other words, i want to critique your stories (or poems). so, i get more point/posts/ect., and you get more feedback.

see the symbiosis?? yeah.....thought so....

topic26804.html

Ooh! Cute you critique Gay is My Ex? Please and thanks!

*hunts for the other post she did with all the stuff*

Fantasy
DoaV Prologue Part 1: topic26581.html
DoaV Prologue Part 2: topic26947.html

Romance
Kidnapped C1: topic27112.html
Kidnapped C2: topic27180.html

Random, good fun
Hollow Lake 1: topic25246.html
Hollow Lake 2: topic25339.html

I'm not asking you to review all 3 of these stories. That's a lot of mooching. =P Just do whatever you have time for/feel like doing. I know some people don't like reviewing certain genres, so there's a selection. ^_^

Thanks a bundle!

^_^ Keek!

Hi! Could you crit these pics please:

Click Here.

*Jumps up and down excitedly*

'All Eyes on Us' in Romance
and/or
'For Matty' in Other
and/or
'Reality' in Other (about to be edited, could use some critiques before I do.)

They're all pretty short, about 500-1,500 words long.

Thanks a billion!

~JFW1415