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Who wants a crit? OK, so this is a complete copy of BBB's topic, but if you would like a crit, just post it here with a link and I will crit it ASAP.

<---- see there? I'm below 250 and I want that 5 star rating! :-D
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Hah

Copy cat. Just kidding!

Thanks for critiquing Field Trip!

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Would love help on this.




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I'd love a crit on "Deepest's Tale" topic25922.html

And can I just say, you really, really, seem to have no life at the moment Aedomir. But that's alright, because neither do I.
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lol 3B, no problem I enjoyed field trip it was great!

Stella, I'll get to it ASAP. Hang on, why don't I have a life at the moment? I'm just offering some help! XD
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It's half term and you're sitting at home critting, just like on Monday when you spent like the whole day looking for pictures of Paolini on the Internet :D.

Although, in retrospect, I can't give out to you without being a hypocrite :D. So I guess we're square. And I'm being helpful...ish...
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lol, its just that I can't go out anyway because of all the homework I've been lumbered with. I only got one pic of paolini anyway!
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lol. As for homework, I'm supposedly studying for mocks at the moment... so I'll relate to that.

Thank you for the crit!
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Alright, I'm a little desperate.

Penelope (my entry for Cal's new contest) can use a review.

I feel bad begging though... I'll pay you back. Just tell me what you want me to crit for you!

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Nah, this isn't begging, don't worry! This is to my advantage anyway! But if you want, you could check out the immortals, but don't worry really.

I'm off to crit!
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My NaNoWriMo feels very under-critted.

topic25392.html

I'd really appreciate it if you would do this for me.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*




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I will get to it ASAP, probs the morning.
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If nobody wants to critique: Below, then I hope you don't mind me asking you...


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The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
- Robert Frost

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I get you Aedomir, you want the full row of five, so do I my friend, so do I....the difference between you and me is 1. I'm far too lazy 2. All I can properly critque is poetry 3. There's only so much poetry I can handle in one day.

Lol

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