The Breed

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Monanoke-

Though she is very young she is very wise.

" How could I know? They ran away, not telling me anything." Monanoke told him.

Walter had to admit she made perfect sense. He smiled." Haha, I guess that means you are not that useful."

The girl started to cry." I know."




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Jenna-

I arrived back at the Base and dropped Naomi off, then looked down at myself.

"Feck you," I said. "I'm covered in blood, again!"

"Yeah, you think I'm good with that?" Naomi asked, holding her breath.

"Right." I said. "Well, the lads here can clean you up right?"

She nodded.

"Can I go back to my apartment? If I'm staying here I need stuff."

"They can come after you." she warned.

"But it's light outside," I answered.

"Be careful," she said. "There might still be minions around."

"Right," I said and turned to leave.
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Monanoke-

THe little girl's tears kept on pouring from her eyes. She didn't know why though. Why she just started to cry in front of her 'enemy'. Why she felt so undeniably sad and lost in her little world.

"Why?" Monanoke wondered.




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Walter growled, grinding his teeth.

"Sure you know something," he snapped. "You know this isn't a toy, yes? I can kill you with it. Easily. Surely you know that. Tell me something useful and I may spare you."

Walter hated wasting time. He wanted to kill the girl and move on, but it was worth one more try.

But just one.
"Buy, buy, buy, buy; sell, sell, sell
How well you've learned to not discern;
Who's foe and who is friend,
We'll own them all in the end."




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Monanoke-

SHe had tried to ask the others but they did not know the answer. Maybe he did. Monanoke looked directly at Walter.

" Can a person be bitten by a vampire and still stay human?" SHe asked.

Walter stared at her. He was a little bit shocked by her question.
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*Okay. I think I've been "dormant" long enough anyway, lol.*

Drake

The searing had faded away, but the ache remained. I could still feel the metal in my shoulder, pressed against my collar bone, as well; cold and restricting.

I moaned as I realized I was on my back on a soft surface; a bed? It must have been, for there was a cover over me, keeping me warm.

I wanted to move, but I feared it. I wanted to open my eyes, but I was still only sub-conscious. All I could do was tense and relax...

Then I caught it. The smell of Alana, and her blood.

My god, there was a lot of it.

I forced my eyes open despite that spinning ceiling that answered me. "A-Alana?"
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**Wow, this storybook is doing great! My others didn't last beyond page 7!!! Thanks, everyone!**
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Alana-

Alana looked at her face in the mirror, she splashed water over her face and then dried it off.

"A-Alana?" She heard Drakes voice and she jumped. She walked towards the bed room and looked at him. His eyes were open.

"How do you feel?" She asked looking his face over looking for any signs of pain. "Sorry I couldn't remove the bullet, I don't know how to."
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Walter was baffled.

"Do you…? What…?" Walter's fist trembled as he squeezed his gun, though not yet pulling the trigger. "I'm the one asking the questions, dammit! You useless, useless girl… Gaaaaah…"

Walter lit up another cigarette and chewed at the end of it. The result was an epiphany.

"DRAKE!" he shouted at the top of his lungs, brandishing his pistol. "THERE'S A GIRL OUT HERE. A BREEDMATE. SHOW YOUR FACE AND FIGHT ME, OR SHE DIES!"
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How well you've learned to not discern;
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We'll own them all in the end."




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Jenna-

"DRAKE! THERE'S A GIRL OUT HERE. A BREEDMATE. SHOW YOUR FACE AND FIGHT ME OR SHE DIES."

That's what I heard as I walked back home. I pushed myself up next to the wall. Obviously all was not well come sun up.

I knew I couldn't do anything. I realised that whoever that was, it wasn't a vampire.

Very slowly, I turned my head to look into the alleyway [you are in an alleyway right?]. There was a man holding a gun at Monanoke.

I bit my lip and looked desperately around for help.

I considered calling the police, but I didn't have a phone with me.

Drake had better come quick. I wasn't leaving this spot until I was sure that girl was safe.
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Monanoke-

The little girl sighed at Walter's responce." I guess you don't know the answer then."

Monanoke turned around and started to walk away." Stop! BRat or I'll shoot!" Walter yelled aiming his gun at her.

Monanoke turned her face." you really think you can kill me? [i][u]" She asked.

The words 'kill me' sounded more like from an angry monster- dark and denomic. IT caused Walter to shiver.

"What the hell?" He wondered.

Monanoke smiled as she continued to walk away.

*Oooo what the heck was that?*
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Jenna-

"What?" I said bluntly as Monanoke came out of the alleyway. I pounced at her.

"What in the name of mercy was that?" I asked. "What are you doing? What have you been doing all night?"

In my curiosity I forgot Walter and at that moment I crossed my fingers that he wouldn't look at the two girls standing outside the newsagents.
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Drake

I smiled at the girl, my eyes traveling instantly to her wounds.

"You're wounded..." I noted.

She half-shrugged. "I'll be okay."

That's when I heard it. Walter's threat. But...would I be able to face him? Who did he have captive?

I tried to sit up, just to see if I could; the bullet in my shoulder grinded against my collarbone, sending me back down with a yelp.

"Fuck!" I gritted my teeth to silence the groan.

Things were not good.
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Alana-

"YOu can't go anywhere. Give me a gun, if you have one, I'll get on the roof and get him from there. You can't go anywhere, he'll kill you easily. Your hurt to bad." She frowned, she didn't like that the bullet was hurting him so bad. She chewed on her lip, was there any other way to get rid of this Walter guy. She should've hit him w hen she had the chance, course he seemed to be bullet proof.


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