The Breed

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Alana-

Alana shoved through the a door and into a building. SHe saw a metal looking door and she ran towards it, she yanked it open and looked in it. It was a small closet. She walked in it and slammed the door shut behind her. She locked it from the inside and then gingerly touched the wound on her side. The bullet had grazed her side, but it hurt like hell. She winced as she found a clean looking cloth and slowly start wrapping it around the wound. She had just finished when she heard banging on the door.

"Come out, Missy, we'll fix that wound." It was a Rouge, she jumped and moved further in the closet. There was a smaller door there. She frowned, she'd sneak out later, everything was going dark again.

God help me! Her mind screamed as the banging got louder and everything went dark.




*****Now she is in one spot, the rouges wont get in and might get bored, I don't know. I just felt like putting her under pressure.*******
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Okay, I'll introduce a Rogue. I'll put a Warrior in too if you want me to...

Name: Sam Winters

Age: 19

Alliance: Rogues...

Appearance: dirty blonde hair, slim, same brown eyes as both his sisters. I'll find a pic of both him and Jenna if I can...

History: Last year his eldest sister Heather became a breed-mate. Angry with the entire family, the Rogues attacked them while visiting Heather's apartment. Heather's mate whisked her away. Sam tried to persuade Jenna to hide but she went straight outside and met them head on. Sam, worried for his sister, went out. They let her go, but Sam was bitten. He's never forgiven her for it.

Personality: used to be very carefree and fun. Now, he's bitter and he wants revenge...

**So if that's okay then...**

Jenna-

"What's going on?"

"I don't know," whispered Naomi. "I've never seen anything like this before."

"So what do we do?"

That was the question.

**all I got. Give me the go ahead on Sam, s'il vous plait.
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Walter cackled, spit flying from his mouth as his smiled widened further.

"Oopsie," he crowed softly. "Something wrong?"

With a quick jerk, up came his knife, slashing toward Drake's throat.
"Buy, buy, buy, buy; sell, sell, sell
How well you've learned to not discern;
Who's foe and who is friend,
We'll own them all in the end."




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(All right! Sammy Boy is here! Lol. I don't have to fight one sided battles against him! :lol: )

Naomi~

"Monanoke. Do you feel okay?" Naomi asked.

"A little weak, but other then that I'm fine." Monanoke whispered.

"Good. I'll get somebody else in here. I've got to help the others. Be careful." She looked back at the others with eyes full of sadness and worry as she walked out the door, locking it behind her. Sorry guys. Can't let yall do anything stupid.

She had almost gotten to where the main fight was when she heard banging from a building to the left. She walked through the door and saw a rogue beating on a door, yelling 'Come out'. Naomi gritted her teeth and grabbed the rouge by the shoulder. Her eyes flashed bright red as she punched him in the gut knocking him through the wall. The rogue stood up and flung himself at Naomi, punching her in the face. She grabbed the back of his shirt, throwing him into the oppisite wall. He layed there, unmoving. Naomi walked to the door he was banging on. As she neared she could smell Alana's scent. mixed in with fresh blood.

"Alana...Alana open the door. It's Naomi." Naomi whispered.
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Monanoke-

The scent of blood filled her nostrils. The blood of not only herself but of others. For some strange reason she could not resist. Monanoke began to sing. The song was of Opra but a calm peaceful form.

Jenna and Alex stared at Monanoke. They were speechless. Why was she singing?

Everyone heard her song. A song of pain but also of peace. It soothed everyone's heart. Creating a moment of peace while she sang.

*Is this ok? Cause if it isn't I'll delete this post ok?*




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Drake

I only had enough time to move away. The way I had arched back, though...

I gritted my teeth as the blade sliced my chest. Warm blood began to trickle along me, inflaming my senses.

I went after Walter again, trying my best to ignore the pain as his knife grazed my arm, and I had him by the throat, tossing him across the sidewalk easily.
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Alana-

Alana was shivering when she woke up, someone was still knocking. She pulled herself to the small door and slid through it. She didn't have much energy, but she had to get away. Her side screamed in pain as she tried to stand.

"Stupid getting hurt." SHe hissed, her upper arms started to hurt again too, but she ignored it. She found a gun from where she had killed the other rouges. She slowly walked towards the base but then seh remembered Drake, she needed to help him. She cocked the gun just in case she would need it quickly and slowly walked towards where they had been her side throbbing along with her head.
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Naomi~

Naomi shook the large metal door as hard as she could. But, sadly, to no avail. A song, soft and quiet reached her ears. A song of soothing, pain and peace, of hate and love. Naomi smiled slightly and began singing along as she ran into the battle.
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Monanoke-

The song grew louder and louder. More strength coming from Monanoke's breath. It spread through out the building like a flood.


*all I got*




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Coughing and sputtering, Walter tumbled as he hit the pavement, but quickly found his feet.

He twitched. There was a song at the edge of his hearing, and the feel of it clashed with his bellicosity. With a snarl, he pushed the feeling away.

Now that he was distance away from Drake, he drew his pistol and fired several shots as the vampire rushed him again, keeping the knife in his free hand.
"Buy, buy, buy, buy; sell, sell, sell
How well you've learned to not discern;
Who's foe and who is friend,
We'll own them all in the end."




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"She can... kinda... sing." Jenna said. "Although why she is doing so is beyond me."

Alex shrugged. "No point looking at me."

Jenna cocked her head. "You like singing Monanoke?"

The girl didn't reply.

"It's gotten a bit quieter outside." Jenna sighed. "But she just had to go and lock the door didn't she?"

She sat on the floor and waited, listening to the song coming from the bed above.

**I'll give Sammy (I am so calling him that from now on, an introductory post, he hasn't actually joined in yet, but you can bring him in if you want, 'specially seeing Luna doesn't want one-sided battles ;))**

Sam-

I ran from Commerce Street. I knew what that building was, and I knew who could have come out of that tunnel.

But Jenna?

I couldn't believe it. The one person we had tried so hard to keep out of all this was the one person who was now my enemy.

My mouth watered and I longed for blood. I had tried to resist for so long, but in the end, there was nothing to do but feed. The more I drank, the hungrier I became.

I thought of the girl who had attacked me and Darek when we had Jenna in our grasp. I wouldn't have killed her, I would have given her a lesson about why she should stay away from vampires that was all.

But that new girl, whoever she was, had stopped that.

And she was going to pay.

*mwahahaha, revenge pact!*
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Drake

The song was powerful, but my need to protect Alana and the others was stronger. I had to protect them!

I avoided all but one of his shots; a bullet ricocheted off the pavement and caught me across the leg. Still, I charged forward.

I had to end this.

I wanted to end this.

I roared as I flung myself at him, reaching to take him by the neck again and fling him around some more.
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*Hehe*

Naomi~

Naomi ran, still singing her song. (The one she was singing on the balcony.) Two rogues followed behind her, quickly gaining. Naomi jumped up in the air, setting her feet on the wall. She bent her knees and flung herself at the two rogues. She grabbed them by the shirt and did a flip, flinging them into another wall. Another scent wafted in the air in front of her, it was slightly familiar. A boy emerged from the shadows, smiling slightly. Sam. Naomi thought as they stared at each other, mortal enemy against mortal enemy.
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The pistol returned to the holster, and once again Walter raised his knife.

This time Drake was too fast; the vampire had his hands around Walter's neck just as Walter rose his weapon.

The result was a moment of stillness: Drake's hands were wrapped around Walter's neck, while Walter's blade point rested just under Drake's chin.

"Well," Walter choked out, "this is interesting. What happens now?"
"Buy, buy, buy, buy; sell, sell, sell
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Monanoke-

She stopped. Jenna and Alex watched her. Then before thier eyes she vanished.

"What?!" Jenna yelled.

She faced Alex. "Where did she go?"

He shrugged.

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Monanoke say Drake and Walter. Drake had his hands around Walter's neck and Walter had his gun against Drake's head. Alana just entered the room.

"What are you doing here Monanoke?" She asked.

THe girl turned to look at her." I have no clue." She answered truthfully.


*how the heck did she get there????*



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