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Storm-

Storm smiled, "Well, I didn't really think that far, I got us out here. Any ideas of where to go?" He grinned, "Course, we could just get outta here and see where we end up."



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Slade-

Slade grabbed the girl's arm as she spun around to walk off. "Wait," He stepped in front of her not wanting to let her arm go but he did. "Maybe we could hang out later. I could show you around town or something."


*oi, same with him**
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Bella--

When we reached my house, Zak and I both stopped.

"Do you want to come in?" I offered, smiling at him. "We could work on our homework, or hang out or something."

"Would your parents mind?"

"My parents aren't here. I live by myself," I answered, looking down at the ground silently. I didn't want to attempt to explain my loneliness, or how often I longed for someone elses company.
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Zak-

I felt bad for Bella. "Sure, I'll come in."

She smiled and led me inside and told me to sit on a small couch in the living room while she went to get drinks.

"Coke or Dr. Pepper?" she called.

"Pepper, please."

She came back and handed me the soda, sitting on the chair opposite me.

"So...why do you live here all alone?" i asked, hoping i wasn't intruding upon anything personal.
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Bella--


I looked down at my fingers, trying to find words to describe what had happened.

"I was born a vampire," I started. "My parents were frightened when tehy found out. They left. That's it really. I woke up one morning,a nd they were gone. Everything we owned was still here, so I didn't have to worry about possessions. They left money too. They didnt take anything ,actualy." I sighed softly.

"What about you?" I asked ,trying to change the subject. "Who do you live with?"
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Zak-

I looked down. "Your typical family, really, but when they found out i was a necro...well, none of us really get along anymore. Only my little sister really ever talks to me anymore..."

I sighed. "Though at times i wished i had a life more like yours. It must be great living without the stupid rules parents lay out for you..."
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Bella--

"It's quite lonely actually. I never have anyone to talk to..." I sighed, leaning against Zak. He put an arm around me gently.

"Im here now though, so it's all good, right?" he asked, grinning. I nodded.

"And you aren't at all conceited, eh?" I joked.
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Paige

She sat quietly on a bench in the darkening campus grounds, fiddling with the hem of her flimsy coat and shivering. The Librarywas closed and she couldn't face going back to her room.

Her Papa had left as she had started to shove an innocent boy to the ground. She could feel his gaze on her still, and it made her skin crawl. She was the lone witch in a Cabal full of sorcerers, no mother and a father who thought she was more trouble than she was worth.

But, she didn't care about that. She was a loner; always had been, but she could feel small pangs of lonliness that she was finding hard to fight. Her nose wrinkled with a disgustfor herself and she sighed heavily, ruffling her hair back from her face and sitting silently.
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Satika:

What should I say? She asked herself. "Ummm....I guess. When do you want to meet?" Oh god! she thought quickly what did I just get myself into? But instead of showing how she really felt, she just gave Slade a big smile hoping he would accept that. Suddenly, she remebered she was suppose to meet ehr sister to go to lunch. Oh god! She thought, I really must hurry.
"Umm...I kinda promised my sister I would meet her before lunch, cause we are new here and all......" She hoped he would get the message that she had to leave. She didn't know why but she actually regretted having to leave him.


Sequyah:

Oh god! It's bigger than I thought. She did not want to admit it, but she was actually scared to go in. [i]Satika where are you? she thought hastly to herself. Hopefully her sister would get her message. Come on Satika, where are you?

*hope that works, let me know if i need to change it TN!*
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**No, it is perfectly fine. **


Slade-


"I have to get to class too. I don't have lunch until later." he thought fast, "Maybe after school I could meet you outside, under the mascot, I'll tell you when I can show you around town if that works." He smiled,

That way if she doesn't want to she just doesn't have to show up. He thought. He hoped she would though.

"Your sister can come too." He smiled, he knew that if he was ever to move somewhere where he didnt know anyone he would want Storm to come wtih him if he went to explore the town. Plus she would probably feel more comfortable and safer if her sister was there.




*Hope this works too. We kinda need to skip to later that day anyway cause I think everyone else is there too. I don't know.**
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Satika:

"Ok......ummm I guess I'll see you later then. Bye"
Oh my god! she realized as she turned to leave, I think we just set up a date! "Wait! Ummm where is the mascot again?" She hoped she didn't look stupid.



Sequoyah:

That's it! She thought as she headed out the double doors, on her way to find her sister. As she made her way up the hall, she thought she caught a glimpse of her sister. Nah that can't be her She thoguht to herself. But that just didn't work for her. Turning around, she saw Satika talking to some guy. Now what's she up to? Hastily she made her way towards her sister, determined to find out what was going on.
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Slade-

Slade grinned, "It's the huge, metal, rearing mustang in the front of the school. It is really hard to miss." He smiled as another girl walked over, she looked like Satika. "I'm guessing your sister got tired of waiting."
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Sequoyah:

Sequoyah smiled.
"Hey sis. Who is this?"

Satika:

Satika blushed.
"This..is this is.....ummm...." She seemd to be unable to get his name out.

Sequoyah:

Sequoayh had to fight the urge to laugh, but it was just so hard.
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Slade-


Slade smiled and stuck his hand out to Satika's sister, "I'm Slade, and you are?" He looked at Satika and winked, then looked back at her sister.





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Seven took Storm's hand and lead him farther from the building, "Well, since we are already being rebels...we could go to that new diner as we planned, or we could crazy a bar, or we could go back to my place or yours or to a movie or....the possibilities are endless!"

She stopped herself realizing she was rambling beyond reason. She didn't really care what they did, as long as it was together.
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Satika:

He winked! OMG he winked at me! she thought.


Sequoyah:

"Hello Slade, my name is Sequoyah. I was just looking for my sister....but I think I can assume she's safe.....well i guess I'll leave yuo too to go on about your business....." She let the sentence trail off, hoping to give her sister the hint she was about to leave and that they would talk about this later. As she turned to leave, she heard Slade say something, bubt didn't quite hear it. She turned back around adn asked, "Did you say something?"
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