Snoink!

This came from something Aet Lindling said in the chat - I noticed her say "I once found a man named Oink", and I said it sounded like the started of a limerick, so I decided to write it. Enjoy!

I once found a man named Oink,
Who went to a party with Snoink
He said he liked pigs,
So they ate a bunch of figs,
And now Snoink is married to Oink.

Lol. Aww, that's cute! ^_^ Congrats to Mr. and Mrs. Oink! Nice idea, Matt.

~*Syd*~

Figs must be a very strong aphrodisiac XD

Very cute matt, very cute! Seriously...nothing rhymes with oink! Haha!

Hehe, this was great. It's been a long time since I've seen a limerick. I guess they don't pop up much in my daily life.

My only problem with it is "a bunch of figs." It just doesn't seem to fit into the meter of the limerick. Perhaps "lots of figs" would work better.

Anyway, I applaud you and your whimsical rhyme. I'm glad they were able to find happiness together.

~GryphonFledgling

haha, nice job Matt--i wouldn't of done that well...but Snoink was part my idea. lol! well...wait, maybe i said spoink...argh...lol

Haha, this is awesome!
Snoink must be the only thing ever that rhymes with oink. This is so cute...sorry I couldn't be of any help, but it IS a limerick.

Cheers,
Camille

xD I love random Chat conversations that lead to fun little poems.

Beautifully done. *applauds*

-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

First reaction: EEP! I wasn't playing neopets... honest!

Second reaction: Wait... this is in narrative poetry. Weird...

Third reaction: *click*

Fourth reaction: ...wtf?

Fifth reaction: I'm married!

So yeah. I am speechless.

hehehe..funny... Snoink got married! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding??

Snoink wrote:First reaction: EEP! I wasn't playing neopets... honest!

Second reaction: Wait... this is in narrative poetry. Weird...

Third reaction: *click*

Fourth reaction: ...wtf?

Fifth reaction: I'm married!

So yeah. I am speechless.

haha, funny

Aet:

That is the deepest, most profound thing I have ever read.

XD

kittykat wrote:hehehe..funny... Snoink got married! Why wasn't I invited to the wedding??

Haha. Yes, Snoink, I would love to see the wedding pictures.

Boink rhymes

Haha, this is hilariously cute! The most random things are thought up during computer conversations XD.

Ah, Snoink, I'm sure we all wish you much happiness with your Oink. ^.~

Haha. This was fun. It made me smile. I agree with Gryphon about "lots of figs". Think it would suit the rhythm better. If I really want to nit pick, I can suggest adding a syllabyl to the first line. I'd also suggets finding a new rhyme in the last line...but nothing really rhymes with "oink"...anyway....if I stay any longer I'll ramble (even more) so I should leave this fun poem now...

Jas