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(Heh, it's okay. Ever heard the saying "less is sometimes more"?)

Audra

I sighed, bringing my free hand up so I could stroke his cheek.

"I don't know what I want, to tell you the truth," I admitted. "I've never felt this way. But I assure you...whatever we do, I trust you and am not afraid to persue it in your presence."

I kissed him softly, briefly, shifting my hand so that it rest against the back of his neck. Now, for his answer.
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Alice

I looked around the room searching for Bella. She had to hear about this. I slipped off my shoes and left them against the supporting beam and ran towards her as she went into the bathroom.

"Bella!" I shouted to be heard over the music, "you gotta hear this!"

"What?"

"Billy kissed me!"

Her eyes glowed and she pulled me into the bathroom to give her the details.
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Bella-

"Oh my God, you're kidding!" I exclaimed as Alice dragged me into the bathroom.

"Bella, wouldI kid about something like this?!" I shook my head, knowing she wouldn't.
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(Don't you think someone should rate this storybook as PG13? You know, for safety issues or whatever?)

Kai smiled and kissed her one more time. "Well, in that case..." He slid one arm under Audra's legs and the other behind her back. She made an excited squeal as he picked her up and started carrying her to the bed.

"Wait," Audra said. Kai stopped and looked at her. "...Do you have a condom?"

"Yes, I do," he told her and continued toward the bed.

Kai lay Audra on the bed and climbed in beside her. Audra literally grabbed his head, pulling him in for a kiss. As they kissed, Audra untied the ponytail so she could run her fingers through Kai's hair.

One thing led to another, and they let the night take them away.

(Hmm... not too bad if I do say so myself. The next post will be in the morning, Ayumi. Or, you can add to this one, but make sure you don't describe any of the "graphic" stuff, if you know what I mean.)

(Also, girls can squeal, right?)
Last edited by Dynamo on Mon Feb 04, 2008 12:28 am, edited 1 time in total.
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(Not bad at all.)
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Audra

I sighed as I continued to work on my latest piece. Even after the night we had had together, I had somehow managed to wake early...earlier than the sun.

And all I could think of doing was drawing...

And so I just sat there, finishing my newest piece while Kai slept soundly.

I chewed on my lip, an old habit I was fighting to break, as I finished off my shading. Any moment now, and I would be finished...I would be able to sit back, admire my work, then hopefully go back to sleep.

I sighed and set down my pencil. Hopefully, it was complete. With a little sealer, I would be able to frame it and hang it somewhere. And I was actually happy with it; I'd somehow managed to capture every fold, every shadow, every muscle...Just as he was in reality, Kai was sleeping peacefully on my paper.

I nodded my head, draped my white cover-sheet over my eisle, and clambered back to the bed, moving slowly and softly so as to not wake my lover, so that I could lay next to him and let his steady breathing and heartbeat lull me to sleep again.

(Left something open for you, Dynamo. Have fun.)
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(What do you say we let the others catch up? We're filling the storyline up! XD)
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(I'll give them until tomorrow morning, then I'm going to post something.)
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Billy

"Come on, Jorin," I said, "There's bound to be at least one girl in here who'd want to dance with you."

"Sure, sure." he muttered, "Law of Averages and all that. How come I haven't found one yet then?"

"I dunno, you haven't been looking hard enough?"

He shrugged, "Whatever, dancing's not my thing anyway. See you on Monday, Billy."

"Alright then, see ya." I turned back to where Alice and I had been a minute or two beforehand. Not there. Now where could she be, then? I shrugged and made my way over to the drinks table. It's a school dance, Bill. It's not like she's going to be in any kind of trouble.
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(I see foreshadowing for something going wrong...Let me see if I can help it along a little bit)

Alice

"I'll fill you in in the dorms tonight, he's waiting for me."

With that I flew out of the room and back to where Billy was waiting for me. "Billy!" I almost had to scream over the loud music to get him to turn around and look at me. Instantly I threw him into my hug. "Wanna go for a walk around the campus, I think I'm starting to go deaf?"
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Movement caused Kai to stir. Still half asleep, he opened his eyes to see Audra snuggled up against his chest. He could tell from her breathing that she wasn't asleep yet.

He lay his arm over her and said, "Hey."

"Hey," she replied with a smile. "Did I wake you?"

"Yeah, but I'll forgive you." He moved his head to kiss her forehead. Audra moved her face so the next kiss would reach her lips.

As they kissed she stroked her hand down Kai's back. He let out a soft hiss when her hand went over some rough skin. "What's wrong?" she asked.

"You scratched me last night, remember?"

"I did? I'm sorry, Kai."

He chuckled low in his throat. "Don't be, I loved it."

(So, now that we've established that they are now "lovers," how are we going to add some conflict to this storybook? I've been a part of storybooks like this before, and they usually die out after they get this far because nothing interesting happens after. I'm dead out of ideas right now, maybe you can think something up?)
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(Did you see the comment on foreshadowing Dynamo? Thats where the conflict is)
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(No, I mean conflict between Audra and Kai. I already know something's going to happen with Alice and Billy.)
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(I was leanin towards mass conflict with that one)
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(Hmm... you may have to elaborate on that one. But I was think more along the lines of Audra thinking Kai is cheating on her and Kai has to win her back. Something like that.)
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