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Melkin looked briefly behind him, sensing the figure behind him. Kelito looked to him apprehensively, eager to remove herself from the floor.

"Come on over Kelito." the alpha called softly. "There is no need to follow formalities right now. everyone is still sleeping, even the pups."

She gingerly lifted herself up and stepped over to Melkin, setting herself down beside the large wolf. "Watching or not, they are still rules that need to be followed."

Melkin nodded his muzzle slowly, looking again over the the wolf beside him. "Something troubles you. What is it?"

Kelito's tail shot up slightly. She blinked in surprise, then sighed. "You know what it is. Our pack is dissipating. More and more disappear. Melkin, what is happening?"

The alpha scraped at the ground nervously with his paw. His eyes slowly scanned over the remainders of his pack. Sadness, fear, every kind of dark emotion seemed to emanate from his eyes as he scanned over the thinning amounts of wolves. "It's inevitable, almost. More and more leave our pack for the others. A chase after the occasional hare just isn't bringing our senses to its full extent. pups, olders, and even some of the middle aged want that back."

The tips of the moon began to disintegrate from view as the sun began to crawl over the horizon. Melkin let out a large breath. "Another day to start."

He howled, alerting everyone of the time.
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Name: Naira

Rank: Pup, (by the way, I thought that there was only one beta per pack, plus a few older pups and an omega, but oh well.)

Pack: Can I be a loner? If not, then Mystic, and is it ok if I'm Zern's sister?

Description/picture: see below. :D

This sounds like a really cool storybook! Thanks for making it. :lol:

Oh, and can I have two characters? just asking..... :D
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**Whoa...I'm totally confused. How about we type what pack we're in before we post? Clear things up a bit?*
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Canislupis -- It is fine with me if your my character's sister, ;) YAY, I have a sister!

Oh, and can I have two characters? just asking.....
I was wondering that too...


Firearris
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Name: Blaze
Pack: Dunedog
Rank: Middle-aged

Sire: Dunedog
Dame: Golgot
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YAY!!! I'm glad thats ok with you.... If we can have two characters, maybe one of us could also be our mother (that's if it's not already taken cus' it would have to be the alpha female).

Also, I don't think that a park of wolves would live in one spot all the time, cus' their success depends on their being able to hunt large animals together.




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Canis: I was thinking about the moving around also when I made the storybook. I decided that not all of the storybook is going to be based on facts, its technically a fantasy storybook.

Two characters are alright as long as you can keep up ^^

And try to post you name and pack before each post. It makes it easier.




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Canis: I will play the part of the mother for your character and mine! ;)


Here is my second character:

Name: Cashmere
Rank: Alpha (Female)
Pack: Mystic
Description: beautiful thick and white coat of fur, golden oval eyes, with black claws. Mother of Zern and Naira. See picture below.

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Dame: Mystics (passed away)

Sire: Unknown
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Hi Mommy!!!! ;)

Can I also be the alpha male of the mystics? seeing as nobody has claimed it yet...




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Kelito watched the pups awake along with the other wolves.

"Maybe we can give it abck to them then. We can go to the upper woods, there is plenty of food there. We will be able to run, it will be a breath of fresh air!" Kelito said, she looked at him almost pleadingly but she caught herself before she did.




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Canis: I am pretty sure you can be Alpha male if it is not already taken...just remember that Zern's father is a dunedog.

;) Fire ;)
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

Take that, Lumi.




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Blaze
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He pawed impatiently at the earth, watching as the others talked about the meeting. Blaze never was one for talk.

"We should go soon," the alpha female insisted.

'I know that," her mate replied, "but try telling them." He pointed at the other males with his snout. "Who do you think we should take?"

"Blaze," she said, and the big male sat up. "Some of the younger ones should go too."

A male named Buck spoke next. "We ought to take Silver," he said, and cringed as the alphas both looked at him.
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Mansi stood next to the spring, wading in the water. The small ripples created by her movement sent out waves of crimson red. The cold water had stung at first, but now it was quite soothing.

As she walked around, she looked out into the dark, green forest. It was mid-day and small beams of sunlight could be seen slicing through the thick darnkess of trees. Birds flew and the rustle of leaves came and went as small animals scurried through the foilage. Mansi let out a deep sigh. If life was only this peaceful.

As she watched nature in its daily routine, a sudden loud roar echoed, sending birds flying from the trees and animals into their holes. That roar was all too familiar. The mountain lions were out hunting.

Mansi leaped out of the creek and shook herself off. From the echo of the roar, it sounded like they were a few miles from the camp, but they could move fast. The pack wouldn't have very much time to get farther down the mountains.

Mansi thought for a second. She needed to let the other alpha collect the pack and begin herding them to the cave on the lower part of the mountain, but she wasn't sure, with her wounds, that she would be able to get to the camp fast enough. Of course, there was another option. She could let out a howl and Winnepea would know immediately what to do. But the problem with this scenario was that the moment she let out the howl, she would be giving away her location to the lions, which might mean her death.

She didn't have much time to think things over. It was either her or the pack. Mansi took a deep breath in a let out a high-pitched howl. The forest grew quiet. She perked her ears up and could hear, in the far distance, the sound of paws on rock. They were coming for her.
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<<Very good point. Maybe he's dead? Anyway, does anybody mind if I'm the alpha of the Mystics?>>




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