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I..basically I was horrified. I know you just did it for fun, but there was little content in there that had anything to do with the book. I didn't find this funny. And the part about him shooting her with her dad's gun?? That didn't make any sense. Overall, it wasn't my kind of read.

if you copied this and handed it out to all the Twilighters at my school they would shoot you. They are diehard twilight fans. I tried the read the books but after 200 pages of nothingness I put it down. Ill eventually read it just so i know what the movies about.

Anyway that part about my school is true they even create a dissease for it OCD (obsessive cullen disorder) I just love making fun of them. In fact this was so funny and good I may just show it to one of the hard core leaders of the group

Keep it up and with the hype your getting I would consider writing another one!!!

jules4848 wrote:if you copied this and handed it out to all the Twilighters at my school they would shoot you. They are diehard twilight fans. I tried the read the books but after 200 pages of nothingness I put it down. Ill eventually read it just so i know what the movies about.

Anyway that part about my school is true they even create a dissease for it OCD (obsessive cullen disorder) I just love making fun of them. In fact this was so funny and good I may just show it to one of the hard core leaders of the group

Keep it up and with the hype your getting I would consider writing another one!!!

Do it! Do it! Do it! Oh, by the way, DO IT!

Anyway, I think I see a part three coming in my head...it's funny what vamp-pregnancies can inspire among children like me...

So is the Twilight series worth reading?

Hey...

I wasn't offended at all, as I love a good joke, and I am a Twilight hater. The books are overrated. (:

This was hilarious and made me laugh a lot.

keep writing.

omg
i was cracking up
it is nothing like the book
but so stupid its hilarious

haha I love the actual books and you had me cracking up!
~Dommy

*gigglesnorts*


Stephanie Meyer = Bane of my existance.


This great though.

I think I may cry. . .

I am a devoted twilight fan and i don't really like people taking a piss from the book but i think this was quite hilarious, write more fan fic please, please, please.

You do know his last name is CULLEN, right?

I think Stephanie Meyer is pretty average. But that was really good. I loved it. It's only a joke anyway...I loved it and it was pretty brave of you to post it lol.
Well done!
I liked:
"Hey Alice. Guess what this girl just told me!" There was something funny about that.
Also, the shooting in the leg was funny.
I want more!
But yes, I agree, maybe Bella should have given up with correcting him every time

It's all right. It's finally all right.

Lol. Well, I'm not a total hater of the book but I think this is hilarious. I like how you made Edward stupid. Some of the parts that made me laugh:

E: What did you just call me? (gets mad and shoots her) Oops. (silence) Oh! I get it!

E: (waves) Hi. (sees the blood) Uh-oh...

C: Yeah...(silence)

C: What's for dinner?

B: Not the pencil, the gun!

E: I never poked you with a gun.

Lol. One similarity between this and the book is that Edward bugs the crap outta me. I'll definitley be on the lookout for more series. Great job!

OMG! Please continue this! I absolutely love it. it's completely hilarious. I'm a Stephenie Meyer fan. I've read all the books and I've seen the movie, but this is just hilarious!
Gold star