Twilight 2

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"You were introducing your selfs?" Ariel asked then added "Okay then. My names Ariel"
"Are you sure you want to give up your name so soon.?" asked Slade
"Sure i vampires and ware wolfs cant kill each other. And they cant kill others of their race.....can they?" Ariel asked scared suddenly
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Riley walked back to Anna and Clara. SHe looked at the group, Anna was tensed and Riley knew why.

"Looks like y'all have been having fun." She said smiling, placing herself somewhat between Anna and the were wolves.
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Olivia

"We were," I eplied with a toothy grin and one of the vampires stumbled back a few steps.

"You say you came to introduce yourselves so do so," Slade demanded suspiciously.

"I'm Riley but then, we've already met and these are Anna..." The vampire she indicated took yet another step back and then offered us a weak, nervous smile. "And Clara." The other vampire seemed more comfortable. She was pretty but then what vampire isn't? She had a freshness about her that was rare with their race and her long, golden hair cascaded across her shoulders in a waterfall of blond.

"Hi there," I greeted them, "I'm Olivia." I held out a paw but they didn't seem to get the idea so I shed my hair and winced as my bruised, bare feet brushed over a thorny branch. Then I smiled again and held out my hand for a second time.
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"Pleasure to meet you." I said, taking the werewolf's hand.

"Slade." the suspicious vampire said.

"Kelsey." The other werewolf offered her hand.
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Riley shook their hands smiling, Anna just nodded her hello still nervous.

"Where are y'all headin?" She asked, "If you don't mind my askin."

"No problem," Olivia smiled,
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"We are going hunting. Want to join?" Ariel asked.
He was surprised that Anne looked more scared after he had said that.
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(I'm switching to first, too.)

I couldn't back up any more; I'd run into a tree.

"I'll...I-I'll pass," I tried not to stammer. "I-I'm not...thirsty..."

Clara turned her eyes towards me; she knew what had happened and I could tell she wasn't going to let it happen again.

"You're still coming!"
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Olivia

"Yeah. You can help us catch something," I agreed happily and yet, this seemed to terrify her even more. Then I realised that she must be scared of werewolves. "Don't worry," I added. "We don't bite vampires."

"Let's go then," Riley decided. With a smile and a nod, I once more changed form and began to sniff the air again. With the vampires around, it was harder to pick up the animals' scent but then I found one.

"This way," I called, bounding away.
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I hung back with Anna as the others raced off.

"Calm down. I'm right here." I said softly.

"You know what happened last time!" Anna said.

"I know. I know. Take a deep breath and calm down. You're doing nothing by spazzing. Now, you're gonna stick with me while we're hunting, and we'll try to stay far enough from the wolves, okay?"

Anna nodded slightly.

"Let's go, then."
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Ariel noticed that Anne stayed away from the werewolf and stayed close to only the vampires. And even then she looked scared. Thinking it was nothing he just followed the scent of food.
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**Are we just going to let this story die?**
It's ok to be a kid sometimes,

it's what keeps old people young

and young people growing!




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**No we're not will we?**
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*nope*

Riley watched the were wolves carefully but stayed close to Anne. They came up on an open feild and Riley saw a herd of deer grazing on the other side. She watched the were wolves and they took off after the animals, it was acctually really cool to see.
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Olivia

As soon as I saw the herd of deer, I ran to the left and Kelsey took the right. Automatically, we circled around the herd and then closed in and charged at the weakest animals. As we simultaneously struck the two deer we had chosen, the others fled and the vampires approached.

"Nicely done," Slade remarked as the other vampires nodded in agreement. Even Anna seemed impressed.
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**writers block. Grrrr**
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