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Name: Adam Altera
Gender:Male
Hair:Brown
Eyes: Blue
Wand:Wood-Oak Core-Unicorn Hair
Length-10 and 1/2in
House:Hufflepuff
Year: 2


Adam flicked his wand at the logs outside Hagrid's hut. Muttering, Diffindo with each flick, spliting the logs.

There was always something around Hagrid's for him to practice on without getting into trouble.

His attention faltered as an older boy bustled out of the forest and creamed a girl.
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Ash gripped her elbows to stop her from falling compleatly.

"Oh hey Alice," he looked her over, "are you alright?"

"I'm fine, currently trying to re-gain my balance but other than that i'm fine."

"Are you sure?"

Alice nodded, "compleatly."

"Alright, well I'm going to be late for class, see you around!" He waved as he ran off to class.

Alice had to cast a spell, she pulled out her monstrous wand and pointed at a random tree, "Reducto!" The tree shattered and a piece came close to hitting Adam in the head. "Oh bugger adam! I'm sorry did I hit you?"
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"Diffindo!" the piece split in two and landed on either side of Adam. "That was close."

"Oh bugger, Adam! I'm sorry did I hit you?"

"I'm fine, no worries." Alice nodded weakly. Something was obviously bothering her, but what?

Adam wandered over to her, carying his spellbooks. Then he looked at his watch, he had Transfiguration in 3 minutes!

"See you later Alice! Hope you feel better!" He cut a trail up to the school.
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"reparo," Alice muttered at the tree, Hagrid wouldn't be too happy if she kept blowing up trees. So she wandered deeper into the woods so the noise wouldn't disturb anyone.

She blew up the same tree and repaired it continusiously, she didn't have classes today, thank god, or she'd have extra homework.

All her anger built up into one moment when she shouted, "REDUCTO!." All the trees around her exploded, causing Alice to scream and cover her head.

Hagrid came to the rescue with his pink umbrella freezing all the trees. "What are you doing?" Hagrid bellowed, scaring her.

"I-I- was blowing off some steam."

"So you tried to kill yourself?"

"No... all the trees-this one wasn't intentional."

Hagrid sighed, "would you like a cup of tea?"
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****Sorry, I just got ungrounded, so I missed a lot! But I'm back now****

Sarabella left potions, happy that she had decided to work alone on the test. If she had worked with the rest of the Slytherins, she would have been given way too much homework.

"Sarabella, where are you going?" Linds asked, following her towards the seventh floor.

"We don't have anymore classes today, and I really don't want to go back to the common room."

"Hmm..."

"You wanna come with?"

"Of course!" Linds (who was thinking about what she was going to wear when she went with Sedry) followed Sarabella all the way up to the seventh floor, where they stopped at an uggly tapestry of Barnabas the Barmy. As they approached, a door appeared. "Bloody hell, that was amazing!"

"It's the room of requirements." Sarabella opened the door and walked in. It wasn't quite what she expected.

"This is just what I needed!" Linds exclaimed, looking around at the racks of clothes that lined the room.
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It was well after midnight when Alice finally made her way back to the common room. Her hair was still messed up, she went back into the woods after tea with Hagrid.

He didn't show up the next time she blew up the ENTIRE woods. And it took a while for her to fix them all.

Her horrible day over, she was Alice again, tired but hyper when she entered the common room.
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Adam dashed to the first floor and into the classroom. A few minutes too late.

"Mr. Altera," said the Professor, "tardiness will not be accepted. Five points from hufflepuff and Detention with me after dinner."

Adam sighed and slumped into his desk. Hopefully he would get the chance to regain the lost points.

"Today we will be turning snails into earasers. to do so will require the utmost concentration. You simply point your wand at the snail, tap it once and say, Earatos" The snail flattened into a small pink earaser. "Now then, I want all of you to try."

Adam pulled out his wand and concentrated on an earser. He tapped the snail and muttered, "[i]Earatos[i]" With a slight squirm the snail transformed into a white earaser.

It looked fine until it started moving across the desk, leaving a trail of slime.
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Alice fell asleep on a couch in the common room, grateful that nobody was awake when she got back. They would try to get her to talk, and her bad day was over, she wouldn't think about it for three hundred and sixty four days.

When she woke it was to the quiet jabberings of Sedry and Calder, Calder seemed to be gaining confidence with himself.

Alice shot up, her usual smile spreading across her face mixed with tiredness. "What time is it?" she asked.

"nine-thirty"

Alice was wide awake, "i'm going to miss potions!" she exclaimed and bounded for the dormatories, she stuck her head down for a second, "will you guys save me something from breakfast? I'm starving."
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Adam munched on his bacon, annoyed at his failure in class. Detention was grueling, Mr. Filch had him polish the trophy room...By hand.

Time for charms Adam made his way to charms class. Professor Flitwick was standing on his usual pile of books, smiling merrily.

"Today we will be learning the Lumos and Nox charms. They are very useful when you find yourself in a dark place." said Professor Flitwick. He twitched his wand and brought darkness to the room. "Now on the count of three, everyone raise their wands and say Lumos."

With a three count about a quareter of the class lit their wands.

"Not to worry, We're here to learn. Now then to turn off the light say Nox."

The class continued until everyone was able to light their wands. Some were a bit weak, providing little light, but Flitwick assured them that with practice it would get stronger.
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Sarabella laughed as Lindsay began looking through the clothes, all of which were conveniantly in her size.

"Why do you need clothes? We wear uniforms, remember?"

"Yeah, but it just so happens that I have a date tonight."

"Ooohh! It doesn't happen to be with Sedry, now does it?"

"No, of course not!" They laughed at themselves, and each other, and began looking through the clothes.
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Alice, Sedry, and Calder walked down to the Great Hall, Alice in the middle, and the two boys next to her looking like body guards.

The tension was driving her insane, she didn't know why it was there and she didn't like tension to begin with!

She nudged Sedry, "I hear you got a date with Lindsay tonight."

He looked down at her, fury mixed with embarresent, "so?"

Alice laughed out loud, not mockingly but triumphantly, she turned to calder and held his hand out. He gave her her wand back.

"What was that about?" Sedry asked.

"He took my wand away, and would only give it back if you were doing something with Lindsay tonight."

Sedry looked at Calder, "Why'd ya do that?"

Calder shrugged, "give the trees some time to heal."
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Adam bustled along the corridor, wondering he should do. He had a break before Defense Against the Dark Arts.

Lumos....Nox He was paying such attention to his thoughts that he ran right into a fourth year student named Ashton.

"Sorry! I'm so sorry!" Adam immediatly started picking up Ashton's books.
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I turned the corner and saw Adam picking up Ash's books. I walked over and took the books from Adam, smiling.

"These your books Ash?" I said.

"Yeah, so give them back." He said with the same angry tone as me. I dropped them and walked over to Adam.

"You know, you don't have to be so scared of older people. We don't bite...much." I laughed and so did Adam, but Ash walked back over and he looked pretty mad.

"Oh...it's you." I said.

"What's your problem!"

"I could ask the same thing!" I stepped up to him and we were face to face. I bit down on my lip to stop myself from pulling out my wand and looked away.

"Look...I don't want any trouble. Alright Ash?" He looked confused and I tried to smile.
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."

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Adam looked from Ash to Lindsay, a little scared at what might happen. He pulld his bag over his shoulder and walked away slowly, trying not to draw attention to himself.

With a last glance he headed for the Great Hall, hoping to catch some breakfast.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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