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Wars of the races

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***Somebody give me an idea***

"So now we go...." Arias said then said "where do we go Ariana?" asked Arias
"Lets rest here" said Tera
Arias nodded he knew they needed rest to regain their full strength.
"so who are you?" questioned Tera
"My name Arias as you know. i used to work in the kings army, but as you know i i stabbed a man who is probably dead by now. Enough info?" explained Arias
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Ariana looked around, "Arias you are lucky, you took us closer. We now have time to rest, but not here."

"Why not here?"

"Because we're surrouned by corpses, that isn't a good place to sleep is it?"

"Probably not."
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**this is all i can think of.**

"your right come on a little further will do" replied Arias
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**I can't think of anything either, try again!!!**
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"There should be a cave up ahead if this is where i think it is." Tera said "We could probably stay there."

"How is there a cave in the middle of the woods?" Arias asked,

"It is a ground cave, so i guess you wouldn't call it a cave, move like an under ground tunnel." she replied.
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They walked through the dense forest way looking for the cave.
"magic" whispered Arias
"where" asked Kate
Arias shrugged then said "I don't know"
"where is this cave any way?" asked Kate
"Up ahead" replied Tera
"What are we waiting for then" said Lilly
"I have a feeling we're watched" said Arias
"Me too" said Kate and Tera at the same time.
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"Perfect," Alania said, "we'll have to walk, the woods are too thick for horses, and we need firewood"


*thats all i've got*
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**Who in the world in alania?????**



After walking they sighted a cave. Just as Tera had said the cave ran downwards into the ground.
"Come on lets stay there for a while before we continue" said Arias
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"There is a stock at the tunnel if you will. Or at least there should be. " Tera said.
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*oops wrong name tis supposed to be alania*
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*ah! im so confused. well...ok...im SORTA confused.*

"Let me go first." Kate insisted.

"No." Arias said, stepping in front of her.

"Let me go first." Kate repeated.

"No!"Arias said again.

"Let...me...go...first." Kate said grinding her teeth. "I can go in unseen and see if anyone else happens to live here."

Arias sighed. "I cant disuade you, can i?"

"No." Kate said. With that she "disappeared".

Kate skittered across the floor in her spider form. She went as far back into the cave as she dared and returned, reporting that it seemed empty.

*all i can think of.*
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"These tunnel goes on forever, no one knows where it ends, and no one that knows where it is or that it exists has ever tried walking it all and come back alive." Tera warned. "Those that didn't venture to far were fine."
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Lilly

"Well we can't go much further until we've discussed where exactly we're going so let's sit where we can watch all the entrances and then talk," I suggested.
"Fine but who will watch the horses? I've grown rather fond of mine," Kate replied.
"We'll hide them amongst the trees," Ariana replied.
"I could cast an invisibility spell. It will only last a few hours but that should be long enough right?" I murmered.
"Sounds good, you and Kate deal with that and we'll start a fire inside," Arias agreed.

Kate and I hurried back through the thick woods to the sparser area where the horses had already begun to scatter, trying to get away from the corpses. Not far East, we found a stream and then tied the horses to the trees so that they could reach the water but not much further.
"Will we be able to see the horses?" Kate asked.
"You wont but I will if I know where to look," I replied and then whispered a few words. Gradually, the horses turned opaque and then there was nothing there but, when I squinted, the outlines of several horses flickered into view.
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"You know for some reason i have a feeling some one is watching us" said Arias
"oh come on" said Ariana not believing him.
"I..." Said Tera, but before she could finish she collapsed.
"Tera?" asked Ariana, but she too collapsed
Arias was the only one conscious. suddenly a smell made him sleepy, but Arias fought against it and won. Then unsuspectingly he felt someone stab his mind.
"HELP!!" Arias shouted and he too collapsed
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"HELP!!!" Arias's voice echoed
"Wasn't that Asria?" said Lilly puzzled
"There in trouble and i know it" said Kate running towards the cave.
When they reached the cave they found it to be deserted as if no one had visited it in years.
"strange" whispered Kate
"Very strange" repeated Lilly
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