Caden pulled out his own knife and let thie blade flash ominously. "I'm listening," he growled. "But watch how you move. I'm touchy."
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE! I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed. "Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist.
"Sorry boy, but I be faster, before you could move that knife of yours up, I'll be having your throat slit and be on my way," Liskano said casually. "Anyways with the news, someone of I high order, higher than your king, has learned of your underground city, and he hates theives very much. If he finds any of you, you be headless before you can get a word out. He be sending out a force to go through a one of your entrances. He'll be giving any nonhumans to your king to do as he pleases. He would be dead by my hands if he wouldn't be so protected. But a force of his be here in 2 days no more."
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace. -Air Force Mission Statement-
Integrity First Service Before Self Excellence In All We Do ~Air Force Core Values~
Name=dw age=15 race=human occupation=rebbelios noble daughter reason on the street= ran away from home because her dad was treating the peasants porely Decriptian= a blond head tall girl. Has shaven her head and borrowed a stabble hands clothes. ALso bought 20 flat but deadly dagger from a sscorce whom will not be revealed uintill ready or a mass need of weopons.
a girl was walking down a street when she noticed the bodies that someone hid. she did not scream because she knew better, she want over and noticed that these gurds were the ones to always hit the prisoneres, and so she was glad they were dead. she took there keys and walked into thye jail. she knew no one would question her , she was the ovler lords dughter. she quiclky made her way to the pens and opened everyone of them. murders and such like escaped.
ahe ran out like the rest however she did not know what to do next and so stopped in front of the jail house and waited, trying to think. she could not go home, that was adefinmate no, but where could she go!
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Twilight rocks!
New Moon rules!
Eclispe kicks butt!
In coclusion, Steaphine Meyer is a rocking, ruling, and kick butt authour!
That is the TRUTH!
Caden forced down a wave of panic, but he managed to keep his voice calm. "I'm not so sure if you are quicker than me, but that's beside the point. How did this man know?" he regarded the man suspiciously.
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE! I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed. "Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist.
"He caught some theif from here. When I found him he be barely hanging onto life. He told me he confessed and to be looking for you. Then Like most humans he died. And you don't beleive I be fast?" Liskano asked. And before Caden could blink Liskano was behind him. "If you follow me good luck with that," and in a blink of an eye Liskano was outside city.
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace. -Air Force Mission Statement-
Integrity First Service Before Self Excellence In All We Do ~Air Force Core Values~
"Pleasant chap," muttered Caden. "'hey, i've come to wanr you with a knife in my hand! listen to me or die!' Freak."
He turned and smiled at the others. "Let's finish what we came here to do. We'll see what we'll do with this information later."
He started into the jailhouse, then froze when he heard footsteps.
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE! I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed. "Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist.
Name: Alex
Nic name: Kilo to her friends
Race:Shape SHifter
Gender:Female
Age:16
Appearance:Long brown hair that is always pulled back in two braids. Sharp blue eyes that have unnatural beauty to them and seen to hypnotise people at times. She wears ripped jeans and a tight tee shirt. She has a knife tied to both legs and a gun stapped in a chest holster. She has a knife tucked in her boots. She doesn't trust easily and will work for both good and bad. She was raised by people that were thought to be crooks, but she had been saved from death by a person on the good side per-say.
Kilo slowly moved along the wall of the jail. She needed to talk to one of the men that were inside, he had information about the wear abouts of the man that had killed her sister.
Description:Dark skinned, wears a snow white cloak. Older brother of Liskano. Keeps enough weapons on him to take out an army. His most infamous weapon is his sleeve knife. Stays atached to arm when drawn.
When Liskano reached the outside of the city he stopped in front of his brother, Kasko. "Did, you tell him," aske Kasko.
"Yes, we must now prepare for the invasion. I gave him all the information than neccasary. I still say we should've told him of the type of invaders."
"No. We'll help them but we'll keep the information we give them to a minumum."
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace. -Air Force Mission Statement-
Integrity First Service Before Self Excellence In All We Do ~Air Force Core Values~
Hold on, I'm getting confused, cuz some people are like medieval thieves while others are more modern. plus we have a king and such. Let's vote on a time period, yes?
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Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE! I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed. "Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist.
he spun to find a blond girl and heaved a deep sigh of releif. "Don't you ever scare me like that again, DW."
She pressed a finger to her lips and whispered, "Someone's listening."
Give me time, i'll crit your work XD I promise.
GO HORACE! I have some IA on Venus, but I don't know how long it'll last. my com's getting crushed. "Show me a sane man and I will cure him for you."~Carl Jung, psychologist and psychiatrist.
Liskano and his brother walked up to the inns table. "We need a room for a few days," said Liskano.
"It's five gold pe.." the inkeeper stopped as he turned around and looked at us. "I only serve humans," said inkeeper bitterly.
A bag of gold appeared in Kasko's hand, "Is this adequete."
"I'm not serving you, you'll only bring the kings wraith down on me," but before he could finish his sentence Liskano and Kasko were out the door searching for an inn for the night.
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace. -Air Force Mission Statement-
Integrity First Service Before Self Excellence In All We Do ~Air Force Core Values~
Reunited with Grey and with the noble born DW added to our ranks, we hurried back to the underground city. Fortunately, the council were already in session, waiting to discuss the matter of Charcol. Caden and I joined their ranks while the others seated themselves amongst the crowds.
"Okay. Last call for votes on Charcol," The head of the council called out.
"I vote we give him one more chance," Caden called reluctantly. I stared in surprise. Should I vote with him? What was his reason? In the crowd, after a moments hesitation, Grey declared that she too would grant him one more chance. My vote probably wouldn't make a difference so, against my better judgement, I mumbled agreement.
"Okay. Then we are..."
"Wait a moment sir," Caden called, "There is another matter we must discuss. We've received a tip off that someone knows of this place and intends to invade within two days. The choices are we ignore it, we flee or we prepare ourselves and stand and fight."
"Who else was aitness to this?2 The head of the council asked in surprise.
"I was," I answered.
"And me," Grey added.
"I was there," Amber sighed reluctantly and the rest of our group slowly rose from their seats.
Dw watched sillently, wishing that she could help. SHe thought about teling elven how to get past her dads guards (who was the king) or how to get to the tresuarry. Whe wandered if anyone would beleive her?
Twilight rocks!
New Moon rules!
Eclispe kicks butt!
In coclusion, Steaphine Meyer is a rocking, ruling, and kick butt authour!
That is the TRUTH!
Kilo had found out that the man had been killed. She made her way to where a 'council' met, maybe someoen there would be talkin. The gaurd wouldn't let her in so she walked down the hall then floated into the wall and moved down it into where the council was meeting, she listend in on the conversation watching the people that were there. None of the them looked all that familiar but she couldn't see everyone and there might be someone she knew that could give her some information. The man she was looking for was named Liskano. He wasn't the one in the jail she was looking for but she had been told he knew the man that had killed her sister.
