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Hmm...sounds like one person is faking her smile, when underneath it all, she has tears. Her mother has died, her brother's in the hospital, she's in debt up to her head, and her rent is due! What will she do?

Cherry Kisses (Cherry is a dog)

And Cherry Kisses makes me think of either candy or something weird like that...I don't think I'd pick it up...

hehe, I'm thinking about the one I said before as a title for this years NaNo...It's not really a death thing though... =D

Color My World

Someone (most likely a woman) lives a life they are not satisfied with, so they do soemthign to spice it up.

Apprentice of the North

Fantasy story about a young boy who leaves home and travels to the north learning many wierd, wounderful and magical things along the way.

Taking Care

JCobsesed wrote:And Cherry Kisses makes me think of either candy or something weird like that...I don't think I'd pick it up...

hehe, I'm thinking about the one I said before as a title for this years NaNo...It's not really a death thing though... =D

Color My World

isn't that like the m&m's motto or something?

Saphira: Sounds interesting, more like a drama than anything else. I would pick it up if I saw it on a self, but nothing more than a generalized drama comes to mind when I read the title.

A Winter Memory

sounds like a memoir to me. like an old lady looking back on the winter she was 20 or something.


Touch of Fire

(this is the title of my longest novel, and i kinda hate it)

Kind of... drab? Very obvious, but it has no beauty into it. Touch of fire, fire burns, it hurts, ow. Maybe something more...imagery filled.


In the Footlights

makes me seriously wonder what Footlights are . i like it.

Butterfly Kisses

(haha, totally just made that up off the top of my head).

Butterflies don't have much prescence to them, so...it's a bit odd to me. I suppose it'd be a pretty good chick lit title or something such, but I wouldn't personally pick it up.

A Rather Convenient Truth

(It's been my MSN name for ages and I'm quite partial to it...)

hmmm I like it. Very witty? I'd probably pick it up. It makes me think of perhaps a crime novel...where the truth is more convenient than the lie, of course. But I'd pick it up quickly ^_^

Thin Skin

somebody gets hurt, in every way imagineable.


Pawprints

(also very random...)

Makes me think of a cat... but nothing really.


Speakeasy

story of a prophet or a soothsayer or something. fantasy.

Meltdown


(p.s. do you have any better ideas for my title than Touch of Fire? *is desperate* if you want a summary I have one in the Writer's Corner forum)

I think of a nuclear power plant melt down, like Chernobyl. or three mile island. I also think of mental "meltdowns" although I call those break downs....


Deep in Mud