Under a Waning Sun OOC

501 posts1 ... 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23 ... 34
User avatar
Gender Genderfluid
Points 7400
Reviews 38
I'm sorry :']]]]]
he/she/they


winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya
Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 8264
Reviews 192
Some thoughts real quick while I have them:

- @Corvid what's next week looking like? do you think you'd be able to finish your post on Monday (or in the days leading up)? or do you need more time? we can work either way, just want a feel for it since your post would be next

- I want to add in another Silas post where the teens hang out at Lake Lily for his birthday, as a last show of their group as friends before things are torn apart: but also as an opportunity to foreshadow stuff. Can ya'll help me brainstorm what those things could be and what could happen, specifically in Silas's POV? So that it's not an aimless "vibes" post. Tagging @Wolfi in particular.

I think once corvid's post gets up, it'll clear the pad immensely.

We can have Silas's bday post be the closing one - so that at that point, all of the kids will be in the suns except Silas and Saoirse. It would be a possible point of conflict, as well.

Let me know ya'll's thoughts! I'm enjoying this chapter and looking forward to the next one as things in the plot ramp up. I love writing with you guys <3
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 23875
Reviews 521
The lake post could be the last time the gang's all together </3 Glad we're doing it

I could see Saoirse not wanting to show up at all because of all the Suns but she does it for Silas. He might have to beg her to come and tell her straight-out that he needs a non-Sun ally there, in case they're trying to plan something. Saoirse doesn't get why he's going along with it at all - it's his birthday, why are they doing something he doesn't want to do? Because he does want to do it because he misses everyone and misses what was - it's complicated!

There can def be some adorable and awkward Ossie/Ivy moments. Maybe Caelan crosses the line with Ivy at one point because he's starting to catch on that something's off with her, and Ossie defends her (queue splash fight)

Ramona and Silas can have a conversation off to the side about the next deal. He probably still uses Morgan as an excuse but only superficially - he knows she knows, but still, it makes it less awkward to pretend it's for someone else. Ramona plays along teasingly. Silas hasn't told Saoirse about the lumshade yet and Saoirse is suspicious about why she isn't included in this conversation

I also like that there'll be an opportunity now to show the short-term effects of lumshade on Silas before the time jump to full addiction :,)

Kyle has RSVPed yes to this party btw. The goat, not the stepdad. (Unless??)
John 14:27
Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you.
I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
and do not be afraid.

she/her | team monkeys | #unclassified




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3262
Reviews 81
I like what Wolfi said!

I imagine there will be a lot of tension when they all get together since they are all going in different directions that oppose each other’s agenda. Maybe even a “can we not talk/argue about this here? It’s Silas’s birthday” kind of moment.

For myself, I think we should have some Caelan and Ramona banter/interaction to keep up the continuity till the chapter that he uses her to get information and she thinks that he likes her.
"And the peace of God, which surpasses all understanding, will guard your hearts and your minds in Christ Jesus."
Philippians 4:7




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 1842
Reviews 9
i will probably be able to get the post up by monday, but if that doesnt pan out i have tuesday and wednesday off of work and can finish it then!

love the ideas Wolfi and Lael have put out there!! the tension is gonna be so heightened ahh
"yeet"
- albert einstein




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 7564
Reviews 156
I like those ideas too! Time to show the beginning of the end >.>
Democracy dies in darkness. Also at 4:30PM in Pacific Standard Time, apparently.

silver (she/her)




User avatar
Gender Genderfluid
Points 7400
Reviews 38
Love all the ideas being thrown out! I’d really love to give Ossie a chance to be happy with friends, since so many of his posts are overpowered by his anxiety, so some Ivy/Ossie stuff is fun, and I also think Ossie will try his best to act like nothing is wrong and nothing has changed in friend dynamics so it’ll be interesting to say the least with the tension of suns vs not suns
he/she/they


winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya
Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 8264
Reviews 192
Love this, and excited. Sounds like we have clarity:
- corv, prioritize Saoirse’s post!
- the rest of us can finish/polish our posts and collab with wolfi for the Party Post :) and corv can hop down when Saoirse’s post is redy and as needed

See ya’ll later today! :)
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 8264
Reviews 192
Heads’ up — I will probably be 15-20mins late. I’m trying to fit in my daily run between a meeting and our write-in. I need my sunshine and exercise lol
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3262
Reviews 81
I may or may not be there tonight. I’ll try but I’m probably going to be wiped out for the rest of the day :(
"And the peace of God, which surpasses all understanding, will guard your hearts and your minds in Christ Jesus."
Philippians 4:7




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 1842
Reviews 9
I also may not be there tonight. Im gonna try but it looks like i will be driving somewhere for work >_> this new job conflicts with mondays and i am so annoued abt it

Im so sorry for how long this post is taking. I promise I have been working on it - i only have a bit left to finish up in a google doc (been using that since the pad isnt the best on mobile) and ill copy n paste it into the pad for any edits/suggestions. Hoping to get it done by tomorrow evening >->
"yeet"
- albert einstein




User avatar
Gender Genderfluid
Points 7400
Reviews 38
I am going to be a bit late tonight again (they keep scheduling me for Monday nights, sigh) but I will be there hopefully by 10pm CST, which is… several hours late, but I will still try to get some stuff done even if people aren’t in there :]
he/she/they


winter can usually be found wherever Leya is = another fun fact ~Leya
Winter you just have a whole cinematic universe in your head ~Wist
winter is the only person who would survive the machine uprising ~Europa




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 8264
Reviews 192
I hope you feel better and rested, @Lael! If you can make it, see ya there.

@Corvid I’m sorry work’s been annoying with schedule conflicts, but I understand! If you can drop your wip in the pad that’d be awesome <3 I look forward to reading it and if you can get it done Tues-Weds that’d be sweet!

Looks like start time will prolly just be 30mins later than usual. Doesn’t bother me! See ya’ll then - and winter, a bit later!
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 8264
Reviews 192
@Corvid how you hanging? haven’t heard from you yet so just checking in 🥺!
Pants are an illusion. And so is death.




User avatar
Gender None specified
Points 1842
Reviews 9
@soundofmind I am doing okay ty for checking in! i had a busier day off than i expected, but I'm working on finishing up the post tonight! Sorry this is taking so long ToT
"yeet"
- albert einstein



Cheat your landlord if you can and must, but do not try to shortchange the Muse. It cannot be done. You can’t fake quality any more than you can fake a good meal.
— William S. Burroughs