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Welcome to goodolnoah’s wacky world of reviews!


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I will review just about anything!

However, I am more well-versed in…
  • Novels
  • Short Stories
  • Singular Chapters
Preferred genres are sci-fi, fantasy, etc. But I will do anything!

I am not opposed to reading…
  • Poetry
  • Essays
  • Theatre/scripts
I will certainly read these works, but I am not very educated in these categories, so I would be taking the story at a more face value, with less of a focus on formatting or writing commentary.

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Review Formatting!

My reviews have three sections!
  • Writing commentary - Focused on things I did/didn’t like about the actual writing of your story, this may include grammar suggestions, critique, etc.
  • Story commentary - I usually include story commentary, which includes everything I liked and did not like about your story. This includes things about characters, plot elements, etc.
  • Closer - I give my overall thoughts on your work!

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Time Frame…

I will take my time to make sure my reviews are as good as possible! They come on a first-come-first-serve basis and I am totally open to reading more long-form works!

If I begin your long-form story, I will be sure to stay up to date with your postings! (though, this may take a while)

Please leave a link to whatever I may be reviewing along with any expectations/things you’d like me to pay attention to while reading!


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Current List…

1- LadyMysterio • Double Agent

2- Moonlily • Everbound

3- khushi17bansal • Mage
Last edited by goodolnoah on Sun Jun 09, 2024 9:54 pm, edited 5 times in total.




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Hi Noah!! Is love some reviews on all/some of my chapters from my novel Double Agent, I only have eight chapters out, but more should be coming soon!!
Chapter One: Donut Crumbs 1.2

I'd love any notes on the general pacing of the story, as well as whatever else you notice. I'm just trying to make it as good as I can. I'd like to publish this one day
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Yeah totally! I will keep notes about pacing in mind! It's awesome that you plan on publishing one day, so I'll make sure to keep my eye out for some critiques for publishers. I'd like to publish someday too, lol.

I will be picking this up when I get into some reviews tomorrow!




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Hello Hello, I hope you don't me asking if you could look at my novel Everbound there are about four three-ish chapters ( and a poetic interlude ) I know I have asked a few others I hope that is okay I wouldn't want to spam.

I will say there might be grammar and tense issues since it's a rough draft. (I am trying to fix those ) Overall I Would be happy with whatever feedback you would want to give me, It is a supernatural romance story based around biblical myths/ figures and the rating tends to be 16 or 18+. I understand that the subject matter might not be something that others take lightly and all you need to do is dm if that would be an issue. However, since you enjoy geek myths, I thought this would suit your tastes.

If needed, I could send a plot synopsis for the whole book.

Everbound Prologue : Tapestries And Temptations.

Thank you in advance. Please let me know if something comes up or if you want me to request something else.




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Cool! I would love to check out Everbound! I like Greek mythos, but I also enjoy almost any other type of myth. Perhaps I will be able to learn a bit about romance from the novel, I’ll be sure to check it out!

I will put this towards the top of my list with the other story, Double Agent. I should be able to get some reviews in between this week and next week!




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Hi there! I was wondering if you wouldn't mind reviewing my ongoing novel Mage, it's the first novel of mine I actually think I will be able to complete so I would love any and all feedback that will help me improve. I'm hoping it will be good enough to publish one day.

I'm open to harsh reviews too (as long as they are constructive), so there is no need to hold back.

Mage

This is its introduction.

Spoiler
Ancient India is a magical place, rich, opulent and brutal. The high class of people, the nobles, are rich, powerful, power hungry, cutthroat, for nobody survives by being content or satisfied. They vey for power and plot to overthrow each other and the king. They plan and scheme to earn money, closely guard their secrets. They are selfish, unscrupulous and ethicless. They will do anything to get their bloodline and house to the top. A select few have a secret weapon, a wild card. Some say an equalizer and some say a monopoly giver.

Some are magical, some are mages practiced in the ancient art of sorcery. It is one’s greatest weapon, one closely held, fanatically guarded, obsessively practised and honed.

All are out for blood and all are out for power. All are waiting to wrest the throne and the power from each other’s desperate hands.

There has been no war for years and the royals and nobles are getting restless, the game has begun, the move has been made. The rule book is but one word, win.

There are only five monopolistic high houses, they manipulate each other and lower houses to gain favour, popularity, money and most importantly, power.

It is power that is coveted, it is knowledge that is hoarded, it is weapons that are honed and it is people that must be beaten.

At the end of my novel, blood soaked history will be made and the Kingdom will have a new ruler.


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Ooo! Very cool hook for your story! It’s interesting how the people of Ancient India have been on the verge of war for the longest time, and the hook of the story is the “game” beginning.

I will add this to my list as well! I should be able to start reviews in a week or so!




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Thanks!
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Hey everyone! It looks like I still have @moonlily and @khushi17bansal for reviews to get to! I am just adding this to let you both know it may take a little longer than anticipated to finish up reviews...

My work schedule is quite irregular and is going to be picking up soon. I would say expect me to be caught up with reviews by the end of the month at most!




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No problem! Take all the time you need :D
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Heyo!! Glad to see an open review page! Saw that you’re busy so I’ll just leave this for July I guess lol. It’s fantasy and just one chapter

The Illusionist Ch.1




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I'd be glad to check it out! I will probably have to save this for July tho...




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Are you still taking review requests? I have a fantasy story I'm working on, and it's divided into parts under the title To Paxaria. As of now, I have three parts posted (a total of two chapters). I'd appreciate some feedback on these. Thx!



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