Nocturne

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IamI
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Sat Jun 13, 2020 10:04 pm
IamI says... · Sat Jun 13, 2020 10:04 pm
This poetic form is as follows:

Two stanzas of three unrhymed lines each

The first line is the same as the last.

For examples see my work in this site called Nightsongs: 15 nocturnes
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Liminality
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Mon Dec 20, 2021 2:36 am
Liminality says... · Mon Dec 20, 2021 2:36 am
Don't underestimate how stupid we are,
us in the lantern-breeding town with our fairy books
the teeming of the lights in our heads

smells like fresh waterfalls and early stars
in a world tasting of metal in the smokescreen
don't underestimate how stupid we are.
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