In need of lots of food

Hi there! Thanks for taking time out of your day to look at my thread.

I've been kind of lax on my reviews here lately and definitely need to start working on more of them.

I try to keep my reviews at least 600 words and then up. I do give constructive criticism at all times. I am not mean about it or cruel. I make sure that anything that I like or dislike I explain why I like or dislike them.

Thanks for your time!

I would be interested in having you read the first few chapters of my book, if you are still looking. I write fantasy romance, but not the raunchy kind haha. If you're interested, I posted my first chapter in the literary works section. You can search "Of the Forest" and it should pop up (but I am extremely new to this site, so I don't know if that's exactly how it works lol).

ryanmakenna wrote:I would be interested in having you read the first few chapters of my book, if you are still looking. I write fantasy romance, but not the raunchy kind haha. If you're interested, I posted my first chapter in the literary works section. You can search "Of the Forest" and it should pop up (but I am extremely new to this site, so I don't know if that's exactly how it works lol).

I am indeed still looking! Is there anything specific that you're wanting critiqued?

Hi could you review my piece Constance's Monologue , it is a monologue so can be reviewed as spoken or written

ryanmakenna wrote:I would be interested in having you read the first few chapters of my book, if you are still looking. I write fantasy romance, but not the raunchy kind haha. If you're interested, I posted my first chapter in the literary works section. You can search "Of the Forest" and it should pop up (but I am extremely new to this site, so I don't know if that's exactly how it works lol).

Sure! It might be a little bit before I get to it.

Hi Nafakitty!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ??
Honey and Sunshine
Pls help me it's for a competition

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!

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