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Hello there could you please review a chapter for me?

war and his eyes ch2 p1

It's rather small it's only part one of chapter 2, slightly edited.

Thank you!
“There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self.”
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Reviving this!
this tender selfmetamorpoiesisi have returned with the swell

What is to give light must endure burning. – Viktor Frankl




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Lavvie, can yo review my poems?
Death
Cup of tea :D




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@ChrisDixon - both are complete!
this tender selfmetamorpoiesisi have returned with the swell

What is to give light must endure burning. – Viktor Frankl




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Hello @Lavvie I was hoping if you could please review my recent poem
Blood Heist
I am not very good with poetry but tried to do something here.
I only put my signature on big cheques.




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Hey there, Lavvie! I'm Alex, a Resources/Community moderator on YWS.

This is a message just to let you know that I have locked and archived this thread due to inactivity (of more than two years). We do this to keep the forum organized and make it more likely for the writers and poets to get the feedback they seek. If you'd like to reopen this thread at any point in the future, please contact me or any other resources moderator and we'd be more than happy to reopen it for you! Thank you for volunteer service to reviewing so far, we really appreciate it.

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