Stargazers: Our Ghosts [DT]

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So I guess the collab is off for now.
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Awesome post, @DarshayataDeka! I'm glad Aisha approves of Alice. Also, @Lael, I'm sorry for not checking the WFP before now. I just tried going on, but it didn't let me login.
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@Lael I AM SO SO SORRY. I had trouble sleeping last night and I way overslept. I was gonna try and wake up early but I slept through my alarm. Please forgive me!!!
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@soundofmind and @saentiel that's fine! I forgot to put it on public and I didn't write in it anyways. :)
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@Lael thANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR GRACIOUS FORGIVENESS
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@DarshayataDeka I like your post, but there's a few things that don't mesh that well with my idea of Davina. Just some simple things.
First off, the ghost of the bookshop owner hasn't been 'freed', he's still around. Davina still doesn't even know what the regret that caused him to become a ghost is.

Also, I don't think she'd be so boastful. Her confidence manifests in physical ways (appearance and body language) but the way she talks is more polite and casually friendly.

Also Davina's been in Stargazers for a short while now so she and Aisha have probably seen each other before, though they probably haven't have a conversation until now.

Btw if you'd like to collab with me on my next post, I would appreciate it.
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Hi! I have been kind of inactive here on YWS these days because the summer holidays at school are over. Anyways, @SirenCymbaline I'm sorry if I misinterpreted your character. I'll keep that in mind in the future. And yes, I will be happy to collab with you. By the way, I modified that post a bit now. Hope you like it. Actually, Aisha is a very pessimistic kind of ghost. And @saentiel I'm glad you liked it :)
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@DarshayataDeka Those are pretty good modifications, thanks. I'll reach out to you soon about that collab.
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Hello, everyone! I made a Discord for all of the storybooks I'm running, so please feel free to check it out and join it!
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Mage wrote:Challenged Adventurer(s): @saentiel, @SirenCymbaline, @soundofmind, @CoffeeCat, @Lael, @PrincessInk, and @DarshayataDeka

Storybook: Stargazers: Our Ghosts

The Challenge: Introductions and Interactions

This storybook focuses a lot on characters. But before we can begin to explore our new characters, we have to bring them up in our story! Your challenge is to write your first post for the storybook. But, because interactions are also another important way to show what a person is like, you are also challenged to include some sort of interactions with another character in the storybook!

Completion Time: 12

Credits Awarded: You can get up to three credits in total! The first credit you can get is by writing your first post. The second credit is by having that post be over two hundred and fifty words. The third credit is by including an interaction between your character and at least one other one.

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Hello, everyone! This storybook hasn't been active much and I want to change that. I know that soundofmind and DarshayataDeka both went for this round already, but when could everyone else possibly get posts up? I understand that life can get pretty busy, but I just want to make sure that this storybook doesn't die before we can even get past the exposition.
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I could probably get one up this coming week but still, I can't guarentee it. :(
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I can get a post up soonish, two weeks tops. Probably. I'll be on it.
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I know this is definitely on the late side, but great post @Lael! @SirenCymbaline, I can't wait to see what you come up with.

What about everyone else? Who wants to post after her?
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I can post after!!
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When we are children we seldom think of the future. This innocence leaves us free to enjoy ourselves as few adults can. The day we fret about the future is the day we leave our childhood behind.
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