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@Gravity @TheFantasy14 Erm.... Fantasy? I'm confused. Could we look back at that post for a sec?
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Posted. Consider this the start of Copperhead messing with your romantic dreams.
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@Chaser I'm not okay with you messing around with any of my characters. So unless you're talking abou Fanty's or another character I don't know about... yeah. Just make sure you discuss your game plan with whoever you're messing with.
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@Chaser I have no problem with you messing around with Crow. I was gonna have him be a sort of target anyway. *Cackles evilly*




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@Gravity @Chaser @TheForgottenKing @HazelGrace16 Just waned to let you know I'll probably double post if that's okay with you. Both my characters are set up to have some conversations that are kind of important to the plot.




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@TheFantasy14 I've done that with my characters in he past, it's no problem. If it has anything to do with Aria will you run it by me first over chat?
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I plan to post for Cassia soon :)
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Just posted for Eva. @Gravity, you know what to do.




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Posted! @Chaser let me know if I need to change anything :)
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@HazelGrace16 Well, if I want to be nitpicky, I'd ask you to make Copperhead a bit more subtle. It's not too much of a difference, just changing his dialogue voice to a smoother, more falsely-poetic tone. It fits more with the whole psychopathic murder-child thing I've built up.
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If you could send me some suggestions over pm that would be awesome! @Chaser
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Edited my post @Chaser !
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I posted for Crow. I have no romance writing skills to speak of, so I hope it turned out okay...




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Hey everyone, I was thinking that maybe it wouldn't be exactly copacetic for Eva to find out about a possible uprising from Joseph yet, so maybe we could collaborate and have him get held up in the hall on his way to tell her? Maybe have something happen that could change his mind or otherwise keep him from letting her know? Just a thought :) Cheers!
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@childofwriting

nononono

I'm not even okay with Joseph knowing

Sorry, Fanty and I made plans and anybody knowing about the possibility of a rebellion really messes with those plans.
And the heart is hard to translate
It has a language of its own
It talks in tongues and quiet sighs,
And prayers and proclamations

-Florence + The Machine (All This and Heaven Too)



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