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jumpingsheep wrote:Ok so @Rydia Maggie and Ethan are going to report back to their school/base after the fight. Would Finch's kids eventually be joining us at the school?


Potentially, though that could be a ways down the line so I'll give you a heads up when it's coming. At the moment it's a tiny idea in Finch's head but he'll want to check out the school and then has to find a way to get his kids out without them all being shot.
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Ok @Rydia !


I'll probably have my chapter up by tonight then
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posted, lets see if I kill them or not. >:3
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I'm going to try to get a post in tomorrow but if not, I have Weds off so will post then for sure! :)
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Yo, what time of year is it in the story? I was thinking like mid-July, but maybe you all had other ideas
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I posted my chapter! Let me know if anything should be changed! I added a bit more mystery at the end with Kyle... could be a useful plot line for my character later on :)
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Just read through the updates, looking good!

@jumpingsheep so glad you explained the source of power! As minor as it is, it did annoy me that they had power when supposedly the world had gone to crap. Solar panels eh? :p interesting

@Stegosaurus good writing, just a little confused as to who the group was that they spotted. Was it jumpingsheep's crew?

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@Deskro yes. Sorry for the confusion!
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I was thinking the time of year is about the same time as now so early/ mid Autumn kind of time.
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Hey guys sorry I've been caught up at uni with a lot of assignments due, as such I've had to put my writing on hold. I have a little bit of free time over the next few days though, so i'll attempt to post my next installment soon!




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No problem! Everyone gets held up now and then and whenever you have time is fine :)
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actually working on it now :P I might even finish it tonight, if i dont get too tired...




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Okay now I'm excited :D
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