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@LeftyWriter Reviewed! :D
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Hi stempowered thanks for reviewing my first work. Would you please review the second chapter as well? The Ripper ? Who is that ? (chapter 2)
It was actually written before your review so some mistakes ar still there. :p :p




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Hi, I'd like to read your review on this short story I wrote, "Statistics". Thanks.

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@tigeraye This has now been reviewed. :)
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Bumpity bump. Could do with some blue stars. ;)
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Me, please! This is my first work ever so I'm trying to get as much feedback as I can while I write the next parts.

War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

War of Dawn - Chapter 2

Thanks!




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@Costa Both have been reviewed! :)
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Hey there Steamy,

added a new chapter to my story, if you'd be interested in taking a stab at it.

War of Dawn - Chapter 3

Thanks, mate.




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@Costa Reviewed it! :)
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Hey steamy I have a novel I have been writing for a while i would be very thankful if you could review my first chapter for me and give me a few tips on how I can improve my writing. Thanks and have a nice day. work/dracowave/The-Seven-Heavenly-Kings-Revamped-127074




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Hi steampowered,

I would be thankful if you could please review the first chapter of a novel I just started:

https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/na3f/Brother-Moon-Sister-Sun--Chapter-1-127285




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@na3f This has been reviewed! :D
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