PMD: Seventeen Plates DT

@Tortwag, funny how you were shocked by something about Twinkiel. (Ba-dum-crash!)

There were other mistakes there too, but that was the big one. Speaking of mistakes, umm not sure how to say this, but @Robusto, that last post had quite a few of them... just more than you normally allow yourself to make. I'm not by any stretch of the imagination saying it was bad, I just recommend a quick read-through for errors. Sorry if that came off wrong.

@Charizard821 Dude, it's more like... I mean... Have you ever been in a situation where you write a character and later find an actual visual representation of what your character is in front of your eyes? 'Cause that's what happened. I'm more shocked about how alike the character I'm talking about is too Twinkiel, and how HORRIBLE Twinkiel could become to everyone around him if I chose to write him differently.
The dude I'm talkin' about is:

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a show off, enjoys to introduce himself, wants people to remember his name, brags about how awesome his skills are, actually possesses remarkable skills, but is distracted by own ego so much that he loses sight of what's in front of him (such as a battle involving people's life). And despite all this, he is stil kinda friendly and reliable when not too distracted.

As you can see, some of the stuff I mentioned ring a bell, don't they? And even some exclamations he has, or the way he moves around (he even has a cape)... DARN It's incredible.

Is your super duper mega ultra ultimate and patiently awaited post comin' in the next few minutes?

The next few minutes for sure @Tortwag! *Resumes diligently writing*

@AstralHunter

haha...wait till the incest and the slavery parts come in

Yes, I'm aware of the mistakes. I was a bit hastier with that post. But I now have an error free edition and as soon as I regain access to Robusto Studios, I'll post the updated version. (I'm currently typing from a cellular device.)

But could you list off any mistakes you see in case I missed something? I am not exactly trusting my mind at the moment.

Sorry, but I'll have to pass that favour on to somebody else. I'm getting off YWS for the night. Everybody, I HAVE POSTED! It's not the longest, but like all fillers in stories, it is amusing to read. Hope you like it.

Like depressing poetry? I whipped up this little ditty myself from reading Romeo and Juliet. Just wanted your opinions, though I hardly did any work on it, frankly.

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Death is love's end.
That which burns the arrows of Cupid
and smites Venus's doves
So that war comes of death
And honor be laid in vain.

Meh, just your typical piece of depressing poetry. Who said I was a happy optimist?

;-; I wike rhyming poems.

Anywho, who wants to be hit over the head with depressing subplots! I don't! Sadly its exactly what I did so....two posts in a row about the same thing....

*Facedesk*

Errors fixed. Twinkiel no longer acts like he didn't know Frost, and several grammatical errors were corrected.

Have you guys read my post?

nah I deemed it unworthy of my glorious eyes. (yes)

I read it, Char. And uh... since I think you're making the romance progress a little too quickly, maybe the two will try to pass this as a joke and be really awkward for a while longer. I don't know; I just want to make sure there's always a place to keep striving for.

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Also, come on. Three days! I know I quoted Romeo and Juliet, but those two clearly did not have their act together.

Too quickly? Oh, no, no, no @Buggiedude2340, Riley is impulsive. We all know that, and so deciding he likes Flurry a teensy bit, coupled with the fact of the day itself, of course he would do something! And he'll regret it later, when she brings it up. We all know she will (and I left that part for you to write. I know you'll enjoy it.) In the end, though, I also believe it will be more of a joke than a serious thing. You understand? Finally, I didn't get your spoiler. At all.

@Charizard821 So I know I'm not Riley, but as I'm impulsive as well (though only when I'm angry, but anyway), I couldn't help but try and imagine how I would have done it in his place.
...RILEY, YOU IDIOT. Go straight to her and SAY what you wrote in the letter, and couple it with saying that you're freakin' sorry! That's a better plan!
*sigh*
Can't blame him.
Ok so, upon reading the title, I believed that I would be... um... Not... really... into it, as I... don't really care much about valentine stuff all together. Y'know, that's just me.
BUT.
This post made me laugh, which is great. Especially the inner mind conflict, I loved that. Shows how ridiculous this whole situation is. Which... Is also great. So yeah! Great filler post!

@Verser Slavery? You're gonna mention slavery? Ok then. I wonder how you're gonna do that.
@15253 OH. MY. GOD. They are torturing someone and he LEGALLY accepts it. That, right here, is my favorite kind of torture dolls
Also, "Accuracy slowed." <--- I think you mean Accuracy dropped, or somethin'. Sorry, sorry, I usually don't nitpick, we're in an SB and all, but it just seems... off. No offense.
"They despised you immediately" <--- Hah! In that case, Ren, go learn some quotes from the Joker/The Mask/anything else that's crazy/evil and frighten them bullies. I assure you it works
Ok, not on all of them, only the stupid ones...

That aside, wow! That was a sad story. Is there more to it?