ok guys. Who wants to go next? Personally, I think Ramur needs to go, because Kirimbi and the others have gotten more than one, including myself. Now, that's not to say you guys can't go, I'm just thinking that everybody needs an equal slice of pie. Let me know what you guys think about that. Also, we should discuss surroundings for the campfire and a few events that come up afterwards. So everyone please answer and good job guys:)
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
It may seem as if I have forgotten about this storybook, but I have not - I am merely waiting for the most opportune time for Ghost to make his appearance, so I shall be studying your posts until that opportunity arises.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
@Wolfie36 and @TheWanderingWizard, nice posts! Wolfie, at the moment, it seems like your post is referring to Jura; here's why:
Ghost and his brother, Scopulus, are in the human realm (also in America, of course, and in that very same forest) because they are in search of the Seven Legends - the seven most legendary dragons who currently reside on Earth, one on each continent. Ghost is searching for Jura when the story starts, hoping that said dragon will tutor him, but he and his brother are ambushed during their search and Scopulus is killed.
This is why, if Ramur hears Jura's voice, the voice is likely to be deep and powerful, and Jura would then be aware of the company's presence in his forest. If he heard Ghost's voice, however, then I request that you change your post as following: ~ Firstly, Ghost's voice isn't really deep, but it isn't that high-pitched either - it's somewhere in between. Secondly, with his brother dead, Ghost is stranded. He'll probably have to crawl to safety, and will afterwards send a telepathic distress call to everyone in his radius (so all of the dragons will awake from their slumber), along with an image of the cave wherein he is. (Unfortunately, he did not send the distress call to anyone specific, so if the dwarves are nearby, they'll hear it as well - but that's for Wanderer to decide.) After that, the effort crawling to safety will take its toll and he will pass out. (I realise I should probably have mentioned these earlier, so sorry...)
PS: I'm posting next! (I can only do it tomorrow, though.)
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But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
@Wolfie36, Thoren saved Kirimbi and the Phoenix. Therefore, you need to change your post. I am not sure if you read the flashback in my post after I edited or not, but nonetheless your post should be changed I light of that fact.
One writer with one imagination makes thousands of new worlds and stories." ~ Anonymous author
@JamesHunt, thank you for your thorough reply! I actually had Jura in mind when I was writing that, then I kind of supposed it should be Ghost instead because of the telepathic communication. Would you like it to be Ghost, or Jura? I can't decide which would work out best.
@r4p17 I know that Thoren saved them from the water. I just knew that Kirimbi was alone and at the lake when the spirit thing came to her with the fish and the pearl, so I supposed that she had traveled backwards to the lake to retrieve the pearl, after the whole Phoenix and the water droplet incident. Does that clear things up, or will I still have to edit it? I needed to describe the camp without Kirimbi and her magical appearance, along with the Phoenix's, as mentioned in your post.
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
Awesome posts, everyone! Glad this is still trudging along After James posts, I'll see if I can post something over the weekend to connect anything that needs to be.
Great job by the way, Wanderer! I like how you've created so many NPCs.
John 14:27 Peace I leave with you; my peace I give you. I do not give to you as the world gives. Do not let your hearts be troubled and do not be afraid.
Just to let y'all know, I think that Pinkie pretty much quit YWS and I haven't seen dragonthief around in a while, so I am not sure if he is still in this.
One writer with one imagination makes thousands of new worlds and stories." ~ Anonymous author
Gene is already part of the party, so either she becomes an NPC, or she has to be killed off. (I have an idea on the latter, but more of that later...)
Jura can be excluded, I suppose, but Ghost's reason to be in America is kind of dependent on Jura's presence. Maybe he should also be an NPC then?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law. — Paul the Apostle
Winter is inevitable. Spring will return eventually, and AstralHunter with it.
After James posts, I'll see if I can post something over the weekend to connect anything that needs to be.
