The Cinereal Wolf Pack DT

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one second........ does the story in the story book have to be chronological? I need to do an intro. 0-0
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@Messenger Sorry! When I wrote my post I had Dazzler as a boy! xD I'll fix it now!
@KatyaElefant What kind of intro are you thinking of? Maybe Ogden could fall asleep while taking care of the pups (a perfect time for Skyefire to sneak away) and she can dream about it.
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So as of now the fire is close but farther away, and maybe when Kimeya wakes up its right on top of them? Oh! Maybe it could destroy their camp, so the pack wolves would have to move around, right? Add another adventure.
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Awesome job, @Fade and @Wolfare1! I like where this is going. It certainly seems as if the fire will destroy the original cave and a new one must be found. @KatyaElefant or @JamesHunt, now would be a good time for either of you to go.
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I think @KatyaElefant should go next. Also, could everyone who has included Skyefire in their posts so far (@Messenger and @Fade, I think) please remove him - he is just a pup and stays with Ogden, the omega (or is supposed to... ;) ). He has not even been named yet, so that is another reason why he cannot be mentioned.
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Oh, and @Fade, Ogden and the pups are still at the den - remember, they did not go along with the rest of the pack to confront Kimeya. I therefore think you should rather write of how the pack is racing back to the den. And why did they split up? That was a tad bit confusing.
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@JamesHunt ah, okay. sprry didn't know that. they split up to find dens faster
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@KatyaElefant are you ready to go soon?
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Yup! :D I am hoping to post today or tomorrow.
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That's great! :D
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Ohh! I have a great idea(well not my idea but still..) for the plot! Some human could drop a cigarette and start a fire and burn the forest down. Then they are completely helpless and Kimeya is the only one that can guide them to a new forest. I think THAT would be a great plot here.
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Yes, it would! :) Although it wouldn't be a cigarette since we decided on the "Jack London Era." A lantern or even a cigar, I believe, would work.
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It could be a rouge lantern.
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Just curious, there are other NPC wolves in the pack, right? I doubt there's only five wolves in this one pack.
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yesh, wolf. XD
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