~Volant~

Hi! I have never met you before! This is a little cliche of boy-+-dragon, but we'll overlook that. A couple of grammatical mistakes, too, but we'll overlook that, also. Great ...

ooooo, dragons! I instantly love it! lol! Conan acts a little old for his age, though, and I really don't think his mentor, however crazy, is going to send a ...

Nice! I enjoyed this very much! good job! One thing I really, really like about it is that it's realistic. It's hard to make something that doesn't exist and that ...

wow. By short you really meant short . lol! So, what, did he just die? Anyways I really liked it. A few grammatical errors, but a story that kept your ...

I really like this! Good work! However, the only thing I can say is that writers don't write "lies and deciet" unless their characters are liars and deceiters. I would ...

Apparently Suzie covered most of the grammatical mistakes. I like to write scripts, too, and you did well. No over-description that a lot of novice script writers write, just basic ...

Hmmmm...Stealing my characters I see. Well, at least you didn't try to create an entire story with them. At least you only used them for a study. I would've been ...

Landon, for one, acts too old. He acts more like he's sixteen other than six. If he acted his age, it would be more believable. And when you said "Vampires ...