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This is a scene from a novel I'm currently editing. I just thought of leaving it from some critique. Since it's just a scene, you should know that the initial ...

“Here,” the man said hanging his small metal crucifix over her neck. “You need this more than I do.”Caroline laughed softly as she wiped the tears from her eyes. "Do ...

“Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!” As much as James wanted to ignore the chants of the teenagers surrounding him, he could not. He was certain, however, that the shouts were not ...

I wrapped my hands around my legs, and wiggled my toes in the sand. The warm summer breeze ruffled my dark hair. I placed a loose curl behind my ear. ...

She stood up on her pointed silver heals, and straightened herself. The music from the other room bounced against the walls. She stared at her reflection in the mirror. Her ...

People walk forward slowly, as if their steps weighted more than they should. They are all dressed in black clothes. And they all hold white roses, which they throw into ...