zinger1912

Ahh, depressing yet beautiful... Just the way I like them :P Its hard to describe the way I want to describe your story so I'm just going to say I ...

I loved this peom and it even sounds better while listening to a Fall Out Boy song :/ Haha I loved how it wasnt long and it got the point ...

Ohhh this a novel?? This is really good, very good imagination. I didnt find any major mistakes or minor for that matter. I loved it and I would like to ...

Wow...I actually felt like I was running and about to have a heart attack. :D Very nice, and detailed. I liked how you said : your legs can no longer ...

Yes there are ALOT of errors. Punctuation, new paragraphs, civilization; all needs to be looked at. I saw that the limo driver's name was Don but then changed to Dan. ...

I have never liked a story with too much detail because then you leave the reader feeling bored because you used half a chapter describing a fence post or somthing. ...

I DISLIKE YOU FOR MAKING ME CRY!!! :'( Jk Jk :D This a very powerful story with alot of suspense packed into such a short story. Very nice but....I WANT ...

LOVE.THIS.POEM. That's all there is to say. I liked how you put To the boy in the library, And the girl with the piercing, I dont know but it made ...

I love the Warrior series!! But...you sound to much like Eric Hunter. Try changing some of the words. For example : instead of "clan" try "tribe" or "Healer" for "medicine ...

Awwww :) This is so cute! I wish guys I knew were more like you instead of immature. This is really good! It had a nice rhythm to it, I ...

It started out serious but then someone gets slapped with a fish...I LOVE IT! Serious then funny. I like the title tool strange and unique! I'm not very good with ...

Whoa!! Was not expecting that! I love how you described the little girl so CUUUTE!! Mean little boy had to push her down :( OOo i want to know what ...

Very touching story. It reminds me of my first day of kindergarden! I also sat next to my first real friend, but i didnt cry when my mom dropped me ...

I absolutely love storied about insane people and voices! Call me weird or morbid but i dont care. this story was amazing. I'll admit that at first i didnt know ...

Okay, i must confess...half way through it.......I almost started crying! You put so much emotion in this that I like I was you!! This was very powerful and emotional! Keep ...