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Oooh. hehe; I never would have guessed what @)!) would have meant. Thanks for clearing that up. It was very creative I must admit; and you were right. The only ...

Hey. Thank you both for taking time and reviewing my poem. So, I shall sit and observe For I will get my turn... One day. For some reason, this just ...

Hey, thank you for the review :D . I had kind of forgotten about this story, hehe. It's actually a snippet from a story I wrote a couple of years ...

Hey Shear Thanks a lot. You have given me quite a lot to think about. Like the fact that I seem to have weighed too many problems on my main ...

Hey Missy I'm glad I could help. The edited version is sooo much better, especially the first paragraph. I would more than happy to read the upcoming chapters. Now that ...

Hey, thank you for the comments guys. I appreciate it ;) PM me for any requests.

Hey there...again :) It was never much fun sharing such news with parents, they tended to yell and throw a fit much more often than the child. They were scared, ...

Thank you so much for the great reviews, this was really helpful :)

Thank you so much guys.

Hello there Munchkinzizzles (interesting username :) ) Anyways, I thought that I'd do the honors in reviewing this. I honestly thought that there was a lot of dialogue in this. ...

Thank you guys so much for the tips, I will definitely work on the problem areas. I'm glad you liked it.

Hey there. Thanks for the reviews and yeah, it's most definitely African. :)

Thank you for your suggestions. I edited the last stanza.

Hello I absolutely love the chorus; especially the part about time going away and stuff. The lyrics are good. I think you have a gift there. :)

Hello Sarebear This poem actually talks about the feeling you have when you fail at everything or can't seem to get anything right. And then you expect some sympathy or ...