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Re: A Thousand Suns
i like the poem the only part that was kinda :? was Not one person runs, Oh, 'tis no race. the "oh tis no race" kinda threw off the flow. ...
Jun 16, 2008 -
Re: Lament of a War Widow
:D I lovvvveeeeddddd it!!!!i would never be able to come up with something as beautiful as that !!! i really loved the ending I take the cage from the car, ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: The Mother of My Father
wow :)!!! that was really beautiful! If you know anyone that is into music i would definitely make it into a song!!! :idea: :idea: :idea: That was also really deep, ...
Jun 15, 2008 -
Re: Death
all in all it wasn't that bad (especially since your new at poetry) the only thing is some of the rymes were :-/ She made me glad when I was ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Harry & Hermione HP Fanfiction (Ch. 1)
i liked it yay :D :D :D
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Dido's Sonnet
This was pretty good, a little confusing though and i think The Fates has sealed my life is supposed to be the fates have sealed my life, im not sure ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Love Gone Forever
HOYL CRAP!!!! THATS__WOW!! jeese that was really goooD!!! jsut the right balance of love and sadness! :D :D :D :D :D
Apr 18, 2008 -
Re: Gay Teenage Romance Story
WOW!!!! This is very VERY good!!! It is well written and, well, imaginative.. The only mistakes you made were "I had football practise" (you spelled PRATICE wrong) and "10o’clock" (supopsed ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: The Hell Of College- Chapter 1
at the beginning it kinda seems like u keep forgetting that you were writing in the 1st person... 8) 8) 8) 8) 8) Now for a very Nikki like remark.....(note ...
Apr 15, 2008