zephion

Great! And as I always say, these are suggestions, there is no right or wrong. It seems that you have a strong vision for the beginning and that's awesome, perhaps ...

This is well done, but a fairly harsh breakup if I do say so myself. Though there are a few things that could be fixed, starting with this line. I'm ...

Thanks!

Thanks Aspiring Author, to tell you the truth I don't have Modern Warfare, I have played with a friend. The goal was to make these two people hired assassins which ...

Awesome poem, so ominous. Keep up the good work!!

Lol, but I think if you slowed it up a bit and possibly allow the character to gradually realize what had happened it would be clearer. It just seems like ...

Please tell me what you think. It's a work in progress, but I think it's a good start.

Thisis great. I love the description that you put into it. A really creative way to use the Theme generator, all I can come up with is some random humor. ...