zelithon

Who invited YOU? I dont remember asking u to read this... Besides, i plan on killing off some characters...Like a certian person... Yeah typos. Thank you.

Thanks for the comments y'all. I will be sure to keep it in mind. I hope this next part is read and enjoyed. Some actual action in it too. “Are ...

I should have mentioned: it is not done. Action will start in next section. Section by section it shall be posted. Anyone who critiques and requests it i shall include. ...

His books got me into reading! I didn't really enjoy books that much until 3rd grade when i read one of his books.

:D It's much funnier in real life, without a skript; kinda defeats the term stand up. I watch comedy central all the time too. Basikally the only thing i am ...

Snionk (chortle chortle) pigmask. It makes me giggle. Too bad I am not in spew-the i wuold feel a bigger conection. I can not wait for you to continue. No ...

Yes good, keep writing and I will keep reading.

Very... PINAPPLE! yeah its like that. "reached back like a pimp and slaped the hoe! boys in the hood..." *hums I think it shuold be a rap.

Yes, guess what short storrie this is from-its one of my favorates and almost EVERYONE has read it or atleast something by the same author. It wuold probibly not be ...

I liked it. Very nice flow in my opinion. I presume you have a crush on an older boy :wink:

Its not really meant to be a "cute" story. Just like the Irish are not really a "cute" people. I am adding much of my own Irish family into this. ...

Thats my problem; i never seem able to end a story properly with the begining climax and end. I always get long winding storys that i get bored of before ...

:o WEEELL *eats someone Acidents happen.

Just a few technicil errors like water can not remian water while frozen. Very amuseing otherwise.

MUCH better!