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I really enjoyed this chapter! I love your writing style, and the ending really makes me want to read some more! Here are some minor edits I would make: A ...

I really like the story so far! Good job with the tone of this piece- ominous and straightforward. A grammar mistake (small, but still noticeable): Out from the smoke of ...

The overall "vibe" of this piece is mysterious and amazing, and I really like the details that went into this piece. I think I said this already on your other ...

I love the pun, and the hand is well drawn! The main thing I would work more on is contrast. This may be because of the photograph, but everything besides ...

Hey :) I really like the effect you incorporated into this piece! I would work on a few things: - Skin Tone: I know that you are trying to give ...

This poem is fantastic, and I really enjoyed the adventure I had while reading it. I think the biggest issue is the lack of separation, mostly in the form of ...

Overall, this is an interesting concept; however, I would definitely look into grammar fixes, and generally slowing down the pace of the story- easy mistake for many young writers. It ...

I really like how the strength in your emotion is evident through this piece. Strong word choice in the words "venom" and "war" emphasize the torment of a hateful community, ...

I really like how the repetition of "Pen pricks", as well as the rhyming scheme, accentuates the rhythm of this poem. The poem is simple, but powerful, and I think ...