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  • Poetry » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Welcome to the City of Dreams

    Well, I don't really read nor review poems since I'm quite bad at analizing such art. Even so, this one somehow pulled me in and I soon found myself reading ...

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Where's My Happy Ending?

    I really did like the way you built up the story sentence after sentence, and finally in a couple of paragraphs but finished in basically those last two. It was ...

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Love of a Sociopath ~ Ch. 8

    Hey there!! You know, I think you're probably the #1 author I review jajaja I think I've reviewed pratically all of your chapters! And yeah, sorry about that. I did ...

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Love of a Sociopath ~ Ch. 7

    I honestly have to come back to the site more often. I somehow seem to forget I'm following some stories over here, and before I know it chapters start pilling ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Blood Bond (Chapter Three: Dente Sculpes

    Hello! So, first of all I wanted to let you know that this is much easier to read. I don't really mind long chapters, and I actually did read it ...

    Jul 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Love of a Sociopath ~ Ch. 6

    And Hello there miss or mister S!! So, Here I was, all cute and bored, doing math (btw, my math teacher would kill me if he knew I forgot to ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Narrative Re: Asenath:Tears on the Sand Chapter 18

    Hello!! So, first of all I want to share my joy a bit. I actually read the story until chapter 16 but forgot to review it a couple days ago, ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The Love of a Sociopath ~ Ch. 3

    Oooh, first for once? That's not really all that important, but hey. Okay so I did just eat it... Like 5 minutes or so (and I'm not really fast reading..) ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Love of a Sociopath Ch. 2

    Well, hello there. First of all I just wanted to admit that title indeed simply made me want to read this one out. I read through the whole chapter one ...

    Jul 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Pirate Queen : Chapter 1

    Hello :). So, let's see, I honestly always love a good fantasy and so far yours seems promise quite a nice story. I like the idea of different races and ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror Re: The Eye's Limitations Chapter 1

    Hi there :). Well I don't criticize on grammar since it's really not my forte, so if you had any error it's safe to say that I didn't notice. I ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Broken Shadows part 1

    Well, hello. I saw one of your new chapters and went looking for the first one to give it a go, but as I'mnew to the siteI believe I did ...

    Jul 16, 2014


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