yungcamus

hey, I'd love it if you checked out my new story. It's called Annabel. If you ever have a story you want me to read, just lmk :)

Hey, Thanks for the review! I know the story starts out very vague but I haven't come up with an ending yet. I just haven't written it yet. In the ...

Thank you! Your review helped immensely. I'm not currently working on this story, I've started another, hopefully better, story. I'll be posting it soon and I'd absolutely love for you ...

Thank you for your opinion. It was amusing

Wow! This was so helpful and thoughtful. I intended, probably should have made it clearer, that the women he fantasizes about, the women in the sky, creeps up from behind ...

haha :) no problem. Thanks for the comment

I really liked the imagery in this poem! The slender beams of accusation are a really cool image. The angelic forms wrought in panes of glass is also really cool. ...

Hi! Thanks for the review and not harsh at all. The main character is sitting on a pier and day-dreaming about the girl he loves when, in the fourth paragraph, ...

Not constructive.