yungcamus

Hi! I won't do too many nitpicks because the few I've seen have already been covered in previous reviews. My overall impression: I admire your beginning a lot. It begins ...

Hi, Yungcamus here! This is a very quaint, short poem and I really enjoyed it. I like the absurdity of the poem that's paralleled with the insipidness of the car ...

Hi! This is a really good poem. I like how the your prose is extremely simple, conversational. This isn't a poem where you're going to be finding metaphor, simile, or ...

I like your balance between the story and the imagery. I love the theme of vulnerability and bleakness. In the poem, the two people are in a room, an enclosure, ...

Hi! This poem is obviously very romantic and I really enjoyed it! I thought your word choice was a little juvenile however. Words like sparkle, twinkle, shimmer, glitter, and gleam, ...

I really enjoyed this poem! Some of the most mature prose I've seen on the site. The first paragraph is great! The idea of the country and pop competing with ...

Hello! I'm interested with the sentiment that you're trying to convey, although it's been done before, but I feel the poem could have been more subtle. It's not enough to ...

I think the prose is really great. I'm wondering why you capitalized "Alone" and also if "falls" should be "fall" instead but other than that I truly enjoyed it. While ...