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Just a quick review before review day ends! This sentence would be better without "it" at the end! The magical races to the magic that dwell within it This one ...

Lovely poem. I have no deep words to say about this. All I can say is- hopeful. It's a hopeful, peaceful message to the hopeless. I love how you repeat ...

Hello! As I have said before, I really am not good with novel chapters...Have to get this Green Room Empty! You skip a couple of times in between the tenses, ...

Hello. As I said before, I'm not the greatest with reviewing novel chapters, so I will have trouble with this...Bear with me! The last sentence is creative, and I love ...

Hello. I'm not exactly comfortable with novel chapters, so hear me out.... The name of this chapter caught my interest. Dr in the first line should be like this: Dr. ...

This is a nice poem, lots of questions! I don't like how you repeat the two words- "blue sky" so much. There are better words out there. Try something else... ...

Wow! I read your other poem, and just love this one too! This fire is beautiful, the way you described this passion is wonderful. I love how you don't just ...

Hello! Thank-you for this poem. It touched my heart. I thank-you for being there before and making this site what it has become today. I thank-you for helping make this ...

Wow! It's yubbies21 here to review this today! This is simply amazing, this poem! I love it's simple rhyme, easy and unforced, the mental images that they created! I couldn't ...

Hello there! It's very unique this poem, you say it's fan-fiction? From what? I am interested... The way you arranged it is creative. It doesn't seem to provide a purpose ...

Hello! It's yubbies21 here with a review! The rhyming scheme didn't seem forced, so that's excellent! Just one little nitpick... but remains there in you heart. you should be changed ...

Wow, This is amazing. By the way, it's yubbies21 here... I love,love, love this! It just made so much sense to me! The only thing I think is missing is ...

Wow. It's a great poem, especially when you have the whole dialogue thing going. But I'm confused. I thought it was written from the point-of-view of a guy, but at ...

If others don't think that this is genius, then that is just sad. This is quite the poem you have. I love the first two lines, they just seemed to ...

The rhyme didn't seem forced in this poem! I haven't found a good poem like that all day, so kudos to you! You can feel how passionate you are in ...