yubbies21

You have taken the words out of my mouth. The only problem was that I could never get my words onto paper. This piece of work right here has touched ...

This poem made me think of walking down an English lane, with flowers all around. Let us start with the good stuff about this poem. 1. It has an extraordinary ...

Hey! Yubbies21 here with a review on your delightful poem. this is so true. I can picture Adam, shivering in the dark, afraid to fall asleep for the first time. ...

This is a short and simple poem with deep meaning. It could almost have a duel meaning. I found no spelling errors, good job. The words all flow together nicely. ...

This is an amazing poem. It has a good rhythm and rhyme. I don't think that there is anything I would change. Although I would like to know it's actual ...

'' As soon as the blades came together, they flew apart again. Again and again the blades crashed together and flew apart.'' I don't know about this, it sounds repetitive. ...