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Thanks catsz! I thought I could format lines as part of an overall sentence that spanned multiple lines so that's the reason for the weird punctuation, I'll fix that next ...

Glad you enjoyed & thanks !

Thank you for your suggestions!

Thank you for the review !

Hey there! Initially I actually wrote a poem about a sponge going through its life cycle, so you clearly got my intentions! :) :)

Hi dragonight9, I'm so glad you "tested the waters" and posted some spiritual poetry! It seems like there's definitely a community of Christians here on YWS, including the other commentators ...

hey there and thanks so much for this review, fellow Christian! I'm glad you thought I encompassed the bittersweetness of it all well.